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randomMe β€” silent stare
Published: 2004-08-06 06:49:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description β€œcan I have drag of that cigarette?”
as her head moves slowly upwards
her eyes scanning up my body and locking
into mine.
that indescribable look, as indescribable
as she is. fire glistening in her eyes, as reflection,
as hate? silent conversation, mute words but a stare
that tells a thousand tales.
a horizon that can never be reached,
stories that should never be told,
and a moment that will never be forgotten.
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Comments: 8

itBurns [2005-09-14 02:34:39 +0000 UTC]

nah! Put some more stuff up!
Thanks. You are my new random friend.

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itBurns [2005-09-09 12:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Why have you only put this one up? No doubt you have more equally awesome stuff. ^_^
Thanks for the random comment.

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randomMe In reply to itBurns [2005-09-13 19:12:06 +0000 UTC]

yo thank you so much.
i hope your not just saying that!
much appreciated, respect.

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Nyctophobia [2005-04-14 13:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Hey I like this alot. The story of a broken girl. Like there's so much drifting beneath the surface, her eyes say 12 million different things. But you just can't break in and ask her to tell you. And would you really want to know? I like this alot The feelings are somehow subdued and dignified, as if you respect her too much to give the game away. Gret work, specially for a first time.

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roguewolf19 [2004-08-06 18:25:27 +0000 UTC]

YAAY. fokken eerste poem!! rock and roll!!

ek fokken dig dit, jou ma se poes!!
rook dagga wnat dis wat kont doen, en ja ek is fokken mal jou ma se poes,

later jou poes

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neverk1 [2004-08-06 10:06:43 +0000 UTC]

well done on your first post bra... fokkin goeie imagery, en goed beskryf. dit voel asof ek daar in boΓ«mia sit en (persoon wat anoniem sal bly) jou "intoksikeer". as ek reg is oor wat ek dink die gedig gaan, is dit fokkin goed geskryf.

"feel the burn and let it hurt" - unknown person.

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randomMe [2004-08-06 07:01:19 +0000 UTC]

thanx so much, that really means a lot! i was really shaky about posting it but i feel bit more confident now... thanks again.

"cause no-one suspects the butterfly"
bart simpson

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baptizeddrown [2004-08-06 06:50:56 +0000 UTC]

Kind of has a quality where you can see what's going on. Imagery and whatnot. It feels real. Nice job.

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