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Published: 2015-11-14 23:37:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 783; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 0
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Description Broken Windows.
Rotted Floors.
painted eyes
that peek through
doors,

Look in cracks
of this perfect
home

and see the mess
you hide
with chrome.

It's Deathly still
in this house of ours.
Put up curtains
to kill the stars

Drown
the moon
with plaster walls.
our words
are lost
to empty halls.

Keep it
Quiet.
Keep it
Neat.

One would think
our world's
complete.
but it's a
lie.
pull back
the sheet
and you'll find mold
beneath our feet.
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Comments: 5

Vanitine13 [2016-05-14 01:34:41 +0000 UTC]

I really like this

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randomMeAndBob In reply to Vanitine13 [2016-05-14 03:27:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you do. Thank you! 

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Vanitine13 In reply to randomMeAndBob [2016-05-14 04:14:42 +0000 UTC]

😊

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steph11e [2015-11-18 02:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'm impressed! The ending is definitely my favourite part

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randomMeAndBob In reply to steph11e [2015-11-18 03:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. 

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