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Published: 2012-08-10 14:26:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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This looks wierd. Moving to scraps later, then im probably going to delete it. It just looks... wrong...Critisim is greatly appreciated. If you are going to leave an one word comment like "cool", "epic" "awesome" please go to a different deviation. This deviation i dednt want to put up, but the only way to get better is help, so... help?
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June 18, 2012
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I think I can help out with proportioning. ^^ The face placement is pretty well done, guidelines for that are EXTREMELY helpful in my opinion. I really love his expression X3 its like he's saying "What?" The ears are well placed too. The arms look correct from that perspective^^
One thing is the head is a little too big or the body is to small. Us humans tend to have broader shoulders. The neck may be slightly too thick. One thing the nose could move slightly more to the left. It should start right in the center of the face.
Well thats it ^^ good job over all!! Keep it up!
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dkljfhg
YAY!
i figured it out!
now your critique will be stalked by everyone!
again
thanks a bunch!
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omg
thanks!
thats soo helpful!
but idk how i can make it show on my deviation
>.<
thanks a bunch though!
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Your welcome! Your improving SUPER fast!!
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Its not too bad, but I advise that you check out some books about proportioning to improve, thats the only way I learn X3
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fdsfsd comments anyway, I honestly like it, better then I could draw human wise. Though one thing that seemed a little off was the eyes, but I dont want to be rude since that might just be your style, just they look a little girly but that might just be me xD
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haha
yah
i used to draw humans better
but then my mom forced me to go to a manga drawing class and ive been getting worse since
>.<
your right though
thanks for the advice!
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FDSFS NO
no manga
Im sorry, its a cute style whatever
But if you wanna get good dont learn from a manga drawing class xD
Instead look at people and draw them. I mean, what is a better example of anatomy then the real thing? Plus friends love drawings as them as gifts and think its so sweet xD
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i didnt
i was forced
-_-
haha
yah
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