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Published: 2009-04-15 16:49:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 8951; Favourites: 280; Downloads: 362
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^^ HOT DAMN!!! I hope there are more hot strippers like her in here!!
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normally i could tell who shes dressed up as but this time im stumped?
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Christie from Dead or Alive (videogame)
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there we go thanks! I knew it somebody i seen before
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Random, as much as I enjoy your work, this one however really, REALLY needs improvement. I love your coloring on this job, it's definitely a strong point, but I need to point out a few things:
1) Shoulders too small, even at that angle
2) upper arm way too short.
3) Unless she has breast implants, her nipples should be hanging lower, almost pointing down
4) If she is bending forward like that, her hands should be on the top of her thighs to hold up the massive weight on her chest
5) Her right arm is missing
6) Her left hand is drawn strange (placement of fingers) and her thumb has blended with the clothing
7) Who the hell is she supposed to be?
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Just butting in here... lol
I do the colouring, not RR. The reason her thumb ends up blended with the clothing is because it's hard to get black to stand out on black without adding extra light to it. I didn't feel it needed it, and I wanted to keep the pvc/vinyl/leather/pleather/whatever simple, so I left out the lighting which unfortunately hid some of the details in the original lineart.
The original drawing didn't have such large breasts - it was edited by another deviant as a 'big breast' variant (which is mentioned on the TV version which is the 'link' in the description above).
She's supposed to be Christie from the video game series Dead or Alive. (which is also mentioned on the TV version).
As for the rest of it, I think it's a pretty damn nice piece of art, and not each one can be as realistic or as practical as it 'should' be. It's fantasy pinup-art, not real life figure study (thank god, she'd have SO many back problems! lol).
Good CC though - it's nice to see someone taking the time to actually make it instead of just saying 'it sucks' or some other rubbish like that.
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Ah ok, thanks for the explanation of the points I was making. I completely forgot you did the coloring >.< Sorry.
I would still suggest that he brushes up on a bit of human anatomy/proportions because even though it is a cartoonish portrait, the arms and shoulders looks very awkward. Everything else I can let go.
Anyway thanks for not ripping into me like some people do with critique.
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She's really getting bigger by the picture ... keep it up!
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