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Published: 2010-07-10 02:36:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I wish I could stare into your eyes for eternity
I wish I could spend all of my waking hours hearing you laugh
I wish I could form the right words to describe my feelings for you
I wish I could show you how great you really are
I wish I could understand why you love me
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Comments: 6

EllexxExcorsism [2010-07-10 02:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow, not only is this really good, but it's so legit and easy to relate to. Nice job indeed.

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RandomStalker93 In reply to EllexxExcorsism [2010-07-10 02:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, trying to like be all romantic and stuff for my gf I don't really know if it counts as poetry or anything, jut kinda writing down things that make me feel good.

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EllexxExcorsism In reply to RandomStalker93 [2010-07-10 02:51:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem(:
Yea, you're doing a good job. She's lucky, not many guys do that. Lol. It does, it's really good, and really sweet. Heh(: Good job again.

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phantomflamz [2010-07-10 02:37:17 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't suck actually it's really good. I like the feel to it.

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RandomStalker93 In reply to phantomflamz [2010-07-10 02:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, trying to like learn how to express myself and stuff.

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phantomflamz In reply to RandomStalker93 [2010-07-10 02:39:50 +0000 UTC]

You welcome, you're doing great.

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