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Randomweirdo7 — Raven Eyes
Published: 2007-02-17 09:01:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Midnight black eyes meet mine. I’ve never seen such eyes before. They attract me; draw me into deep black pools of loneliness and sorrow. The laughter from my friends fade away, as well as the stench of garbage and traffic, as I watch this stranger. Violet hair flows in the breeze and a piercing grace his red, lower lip. Moonlight pale skin shines and bangs hang tiredly under your eyes. He stands alone on the crowded platform and darkness surrounds him.

Who are you stranger?

The way he looks at me, he seems to thirst for something I have. I can almost see that nasty little green monster crawling on your back. Come over here stranger, you can have it all; I’ll love you for who you are. I want to help you stranger, I want to hold you. Just come over here, to the light and laughter.

The expression on your face suddenly changes, from loneliness to curiosity. Did you realise that I want to help you? Can you see that in my eyes? Your raven black eyes are staring into mine and neither of us can let go of our gaze. It’s like the only thing keeping us alive is the others eyes, that the others eyes is our food and water, our air.

Suddenly one of your heavy, booted feet takes a step closer towards me. My heart beats in my ear. A bit of light crosses your face and your eyes light up. Hope shines in them. Suddenly my breath comes in small gasps and my hands start to shake. How can you take my breath away stranger? The way your purple hair moves in the wind, the way I drown in the black pools that are your eyes, makes me wonder what kind of god you are.

You take another step towards me, but this one seems lighter and easier to take. Once you’ve begun your journey stranger it will become easier. The whole world seems to light up with your steps and the most glorious music plays itself in my ears. My friend’s voices have long since left my mind, because you’re the only one there stranger. Amour, why did you have to shoot me with your arrows of love? The doves on the train station flies out of your way and it makes you seem magical, powerful, but most of all beautiful.

You have taken so many steps, but still this moment lasts forever. You’re only a few feet away from me and I start to panic inside. What will I do when he reaches me? What will I say?

What will HE do?

But words weren’t needed as you reached me; every motion seemed to flow like water. You were standing so close that I could see that your hair roots were black. Your scent was sweet and masculine and your breath was minty. You’re breathing harder then I was stranger. Did it take you so much strength to reach me? You stare into my eyes and for him it seems like there is no tomorrow, only here and now.

Butterflies burn in my stomach and my head feels light. My knees are shaking so bad that I almost can’t stand, but still you and I haven’t been able to break eye contact. Your thin, black shirt shows your muscles and your trousers are very form fitting.

You take a step closer, and I can feel the heat radiating from your body. I feel your breath blow strands of hair away from my face and I have to look right up to be able to see your face. Your chest rises and falls with every breath you take. If I were to lean forward just a tiny bit I would be resting my head on your strong torso. I take a deep breath and touch your shoulder gently, with a feather like touch. You respond by taking a hold of my hand and holding onto it tight.
The grip on my hand is the only thing that keeps me from fainting; it’s the only thing I can concentrate on. Church bells chime in my head and I feel weight less but at the same time like gravity’s using all it’s strength to keep me down to earth.

Then your jaws opened, and cherry colored lips spread to let a dark musical sound enter the world. The kind of sound that makes wonderful shivers run down your spine. Your voice would melt butter; it would make stars fall from the sky. Only two words left those kissable lips of yours. But you don’t need to say anything else, words aren’t needed right now.

”Hello stranger.”

The train lurches and drives down the tracks to a new life.
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missan [2007-02-17 14:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Fantastisk Men den sista meningen, "The train lurches and drives down the tracks to a new life.", stör lite. Om man tar bort den skulle det bli mer effektfullt. Men du är författaren, gör som du vill

Du inspirerar till bilder

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Randomweirdo7 In reply to missan [2007-02-17 15:10:06 +0000 UTC]

yay I'm inspiration! yeah... I'll take a look at that last sentence for ya

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