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Raspberry-Heaven β€” Naruto: I'm with you
Published: 2005-06-15 15:16:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 5323; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 154
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Description I'm standing on the bridge
I'm waiting in the dark

Naruto sat idly by the bridge where Team 7 would meet, patiently waiting. He leaned his head back onto one of the cool, metallic bars, sighing apathetically. Gazing upwards, the blonde grimaced. It looked like it was going to start pouring any minute. The sky was covered with a blanket of grey, overshadowing the normally blue view. Naruto blinked in suprise. A drop splattered on his nose. Great. Now he was going to be soaking wet in a matter of minutes. He quickly ran under the nearest tree, trying to shield himself from the offending rain. It worked, but only barely. The pace of the raindrops quickened, dampening the poor boy in seconds.

Well, that didn't matter. He was wating for someone.

I thought that you'd be here by now

Naruto checked at his watch, reflecting on the good decision to get one that was waterproof. The small, blinking numbers read 6:42. He was late. Naruto slumped against the tree, a bit miffed.

"The idiot was always punctual. Why break that habit now?"

Nothing to worry about, though. He would see him soon enough. Right?

There's nothing but the rain
No footsteps on the ground

Naruto glanced back and forwards, looking around. He should be able to hear him any minute. That familiar "Oi," that small smile. A tiny grin sneaked its way across Naruto's lips at the thought. Seeing nothing, he crossed his arms in dissapointment. That was just like the bastard to keep him waiting like this. Naruto wiped a damp hair from his face, flicking the water away. Of course, that was about as useless as an umbrella in a waterfall. As if to spite him, it rained even harder.

"Oh, come one..." He murmured to himself, brow furrowed in frustration.

I'm listening, but there's no sound

"Oi, dobe."

Naruto turned, seeing that familiar deadpanned face behind him. He tilted his head to the side in a question. Odd, Sasuke never talked to him so casually like this.

"What?" Upon realization of what he was just called, he said, "And don't call me 'dobe!'" Apparently, Naruto had grown accustomed to the name. He didn't react as much as before anymore.

Sasuke rolled his eyes. "Look, meet me by the bridge, okay? 6:30. Don't be late."

Sasuke didn't even give Naruto a chance to respond. The brunette had already turned on his heels, walking away.

"Tch, bastard," Naruto muttered under his breath.

Isn't anyone trying to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home?

Naruto sneezed, shivering a little. It was getting colder, and the evening was getting closer. Naruto checked his watch again. 7:23. He'd been waiting for over a half hour, and for what? The blonde considered leaving then and there. But something made him stop. Morbid curiosity, perhaps? Or maybe the boy was just being unrealistic. In all honesty, he was looking forward to their meeting. In all truths, ever since Sasuke came back, things had been awkward between them. Maybe this could give them time to clear the air, so to speak. Of course, there wasn't going to be any air to clear if the bastard didn't get here soon, because a certain blonde was getting a little pissed off.

It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life

And so, with a strange (and somewhat pointless) determination, Naruto crouched back onto the ground, trying not to get his pants dirty with mud. Leaning against the trunk of the tree, he crossed his arms, glaring at the sky like it was the source of his problems. Which, upon reflection, it was, but not the main dilemma. As uncomfortable as a wet jumpsuit was, he was willing to ignore it. If and when the bastard finally got the nerve to show up, he was sure to get an earful.

Won't you take me by the hand, take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are but I, I'm with you

The sky was getting darker as night drew near. Naruto huddled his knees towards his body for warmth. What the hell was he doing out here at this point, anyway? It was all probably just a joke, just a prank. A trick to get Naruto sitting in the rain like a complete idiot.

Well, if that's what the bastard wanted, then I should congratulate him later. He sneezed again, this time louder. Then I'll kick his ass.

Naruto's eyes closed halfway. He was getting a little sleepy.

I'm with you

The blonde shook his head, an attempt to rid himself of the damp hair that obscured his vision. Alas, it was to no avail. His vision was getting blurry, and he was feeling somewhat lightheaded. But he persevered, trying to obtain a functional state of mind. In an almost perverse way, he wanted to see Sasuke coming up to him, umbrella in hand, smirking at him. Just to prove that he was right, that it was all just a ploy to make him miserable. As per usual.

He was almost afraid to look at his watch.

8:36.

I'm looking for a place
I'm searching for a face

Tears unexpectedly gathered at his eyes. He didn't want to start crying, not now, not ever. It felt like if he started to cry even one bit, then that would be like admitting defeat. And as we all know, that is the one thing that he was uncapable of. Unfortunately, there are times that you had to admit defeat, and times that it was shoved in your face.

Is anybody here I know

Hot, messy tears trailed silently along the contours of Naruto's face. His eyes reddened, silently releasing long-awaited frustration. He felt betrayed. He honestly thought that there was some chance that Sasuke had grown somewhat human, but he geussed that was hoping for too much. And so he cried in the deafening silence, not making a sound. Who knows? Maybe if Sasuke came by, he'd think it was just the rain...

Cause nothing's going right and
Everythings a mess

Wiping his eyes with the arm of his sleeve, he closed his eyes. His body suddenly felt heavy. It was almost like there was a gigantic weight on his shoulders, like a lead apron he couldn't take off. His arm flopped needlessly to the side. The blonde's entire body slumped, as he drifted into the welcoming oblivion of unconsciousness.

Sasuke...

And no one likes to be alone

"Naruto? Are you still here? I-"

...

"Oh, shit!"

Isn't anyone trying to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home?

Naruto woke up, head pounding like crazy. He was reminded of Ero-sennin. He supposed this was similar to what it was like to have a hangover. After over two years of training with him, he was bound to encounter the experience, though not first-hand. There were plenty of mornings where he heard Jiraiya complaining to himself about his aching head.

Naruto looked around, suddenly aware of his surroundings. He didn't recognize this place at all. The bed he was laying in was about twice the size of his own, the room much bigger. He looked at himself, blinking in suprise. He had new pajamas on. What the hell? Looking around, he saw his clothes drying on a chair across the room. Okay, now he was freaking out a little. None of these things were good signs.

"Well, maybe except for the new pajamas, it would have been a pain sleeping in wet-"

Naruto rapped his knuckles on his head upon realization of how stupid his train of thought sounded, even in his own head. So he did the next reasonable thing.

WHAT THE HELL AM I THINKING I HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE WHERE THE HELL AM I WHAT'S GOING ON HEEEELLLLP!

...He panicked.

It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life

Naruto was about to escape out the window when he heard a rapping on the door of the bedroom.

"Shit!

He only hastened his movements, quickly grabbing his (Thankfully dry) clothes from the chair. He was about to go running for how far in his pajamas, but that wasn't important at the moment! The door opened, and Naruto stopped, paralyzed by shock.

Holding the door open was a guilty-looking Sasuke, which soon reverted to a what-the-hell-are-you-doing-you-idiot Sasuke.

"Naruto, what do you think you're doing, and why are you about to jump out of my window?"

Naruto blinked. "This is your house?"

Sasuke rolled his eyes. "I live here, yes."

Naruto got madder. "Well, how am I supposed to know that? Here I am, thinking I got kidnapped, when I find out that YOU took me here. I'd rather have the kidnapping!" He snarled. "Now if you'll excuse me, I'll be on my w-"

Naruto felt a hand grasping at his wrist. He looked behind him to see Sasuke, looking sad again.

"Don't go."

Naruto had never seen his eyes look so...Β Β vulnerable.

Won't you, take me by the hand, take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are but I, I'm with you

"Last night... I know I was supposed to meet you, but they gave me a mission. I couldn't refuse it, you and I both know I'm on thin ice with Konoha already." A spark of guilt flitted through his eyes, but it was breif. "They've never directly said it before, but I got the impression that if I refused any services towards Konoha, then it's pretty much over for me." Sasuke sighed, looking down on the ground. "The only reason I'm here in the first place is the Sharingan. Konoha's forces are weak, and they need all the allies they can get."

He gave a hollow chuckle. "No matter how unsure the circumstances."

I'm with you

"Sasuke..." Naruto murmured. He stepped down from the windowsill, thinking hard. So it wasn't a joke?

Won't you, take me by the hand, take me somewhere new

"I came by, with the hope that you would still be waiting, pissed off and ready to yell your head off at me," Sasuke continued, a brief sensation of mirth in his voice. "But that would have been okay. And when I saw you, you were unconscious."

Naruto racked his brain, trying to remember. He remembered it getting dark, feeling sleepy...

Sasuke shrugged. "So I took you home with me." A light tinge of pink showed, a deep contrast to his alabaster skin. "I mean, what was I supposed to do?"

Naruto paused, a question suddenly weighing on his mind.

"So... What is it you wanted to tell me, anyway?" Naruto asked.

I don't know who you are but I, I'm with you

Sasuke hesitated, keeping silent for a moment. He shrugged, as if to say, 'What have I got to lose?'

"I wanted you to give me something." He said flatly.

Naruto, confused, tried to geuss what Sasuke would want from him. When he couldn't think of anything at all, he asked, "What did you want from me?"

I'm with you.

Sasuke glanced to the side, refusing to meet Naruto's eyes.

"You," He said quietly, "With me."

I'm with you

Naruto let a bright smile bloom on his face. He took Sasuke's hand in his, blue eyes shining with something Sasuke hadn't seen for a long, long time.

"I think I can give you that."
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Comments: 38

nightfury150 [2014-06-16 22:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Holding the door open was a guilty-looking Sasuke, which soon reverted to a what-the-hell-are-you-doing-you-idiot Sasuke.

^ this line. This line only made me star it. AWESOME EXPLANATION.

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Tori-the-Vixen [2010-12-13 20:30:46 +0000 UTC]

kawii!

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kirikazu [2010-06-10 15:10:25 +0000 UTC]

that was my expression at the end exactly. it was so weet i love your work
you should get paid for your awesome work if you as me...i can't pay you because i'm poor(dude i have food stamps) but someone should

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BlissSlyOne [2009-07-13 00:01:31 +0000 UTC]

"Holding the door open was a guilty-looking Sasuke, which soon reverted to a what-the-hell-are-you-doing-you-idiot Sasuke."

XDDD laughed SO hard at that part because it's so imaginable

I like this, it's sweet ^^

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Dark-Werewolf91 [2009-06-26 15:10:58 +0000 UTC]

I like the song, nicely done
maybe you should credit the owners of naruto and the song, not just say it's not yours

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gaaragirl1495 [2009-05-30 20:48:21 +0000 UTC]

AH!
that was so sweet!!


i loved it.

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kyuubivessel [2009-04-24 14:35:16 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME! i love it, its sad up until the end, they it brightens up.... and the song fit perfectly, so it going in my favs

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mishi271 [2007-08-06 00:55:42 +0000 UTC]

this is reaaally good. but maybe you should make the ending a little longer and detailed?
it's a great fic though. i really love that song.

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gaaraxangel [2007-05-30 16:56:02 +0000 UTC]

freaky im listen to that song right now i love singing to it

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tomppu [2007-05-26 15:48:10 +0000 UTC]

IΒ΄m just giggling here like stupid little girl. It was so cute and fluffy. Yam.

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gummy-bear-power [2007-02-11 13:17:26 +0000 UTC]

seriously. that's rad.

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AnyaFrib [2007-02-03 04:18:35 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhhhhhhhh you write so gooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Serielle [2006-05-14 10:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Squee! This was sooo adorable! -melts into SasuNaru mush- Argh! Awesome story!

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DazeWolf [2005-08-11 04:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh! That was just too sweet! Such perfect descriptions! XD I was so engrossed in it, my sister came in and asked me something, repeated it three times, and whapped me on the head before I realized she had entered the room! XD

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Fire-Tiger [2005-06-27 10:52:02 +0000 UTC]

squeeee!!! so good!!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to Fire-Tiger [2005-06-27 14:55:03 +0000 UTC]

*grin* Thank you.

I LOVE YOUR SIGNATURE. (The one at the top) Best quote ever.

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Fire-Tiger In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-06-28 00:46:55 +0000 UTC]

love yours too!

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CeeKari [2005-06-27 02:22:26 +0000 UTC]

How sweet! You do the whole mushy-stuff really well ^_^ And I'm not saying mushy as in bad mushy. Mushy can be good. In your case, very good

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LvKyo [2005-06-23 22:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwww, it's so beautiful ^-^ I'm sharing this with my guy friends. ^-^

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to LvKyo [2005-06-23 22:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Hope he likes it too XD

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UsagiPrince [2005-06-22 11:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! -dies-

That was sooooo cute! I love your songfics!

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vamp4life [2005-06-21 21:19:46 +0000 UTC]

awesome job the song went well with the poem!

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SangoChan56 [2005-06-17 01:44:39 +0000 UTC]

T_______________T you never cease to amaze me you did such a wondeful job on this I just can't stop myself from crying~ *fav's*

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to SangoChan56 [2005-06-17 04:51:07 +0000 UTC]

O.o I didn't think I made this one all that sad. XD although I geuss it is until around the end. still, I tried to sprink;le a bit of humor in there too. Thank youuu!

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SangoChan56 In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-06-17 15:09:39 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't exactly sad XD;;;

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to SangoChan56 [2005-06-17 15:11:04 +0000 UTC]

That's what I thought too! So why'd ya cry?

Or do my fics just have that effect on people...?

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SangoChan56 In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-06-17 15:14:35 +0000 UTC]

You just have the effect on people ._.

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to SangoChan56 [2005-06-17 15:16:57 +0000 UTC]

*laugh* Oh well. At least the effect isn't somewhere along the lines of... Hmm... How should I put it?

Oh yeah.

"EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *squealOMGWTFBBQ*"

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SangoChan56 In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-06-17 15:21:46 +0000 UTC]



you have got to be kidding me XDDDDD

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Akira-kun [2005-06-16 23:11:59 +0000 UTC]

IΒ΄t was really cute and I liked it!

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to Akira-kun [2005-06-17 02:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Your gallery's cute. And as far as yer avatar goes, I can only describe it in imitation of Lee...

:thumbsub:

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yaoi101 [2005-06-16 06:30:01 +0000 UTC]

It seems to be popular beliefe that Na-chan gets sick easily in cold weather...personally I love the idea since it give us fangirls extra fluff material but I dont think its cannon....hmmm...will have to research that...
Great fic though^_^

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isis-amataeru [2005-06-16 02:18:27 +0000 UTC]

awww omg that is so cute~! and so sweet~ girl you come up with the best shonen-ai stories ever! ne I love the descriptions and it seemed Naruto felt betrayed when he was waiting because he had always been alone and he wanted to know why Sasuke was late. so sweet~ *sniff* The song fit perfectly~ it flowed so well and it was so pretty
Great work Raspberry-chan~! ^^

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Raspberry-Heaven In reply to isis-amataeru [2005-06-16 03:20:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, isis!

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isis-amataeru In reply to Raspberry-Heaven [2005-06-16 20:26:14 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome! XD

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gyakuten [2005-06-15 22:01:33 +0000 UTC]

I like how you described the change in Sasuke's features when he came in the bedroom

And nah o_O'' it still seems like strong friendship to me at the end. I'm always wondering, Does Naruto forgive as easily as they say in fanfictions o_O''?

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Akuhara In reply to gyakuten [2008-06-09 23:00:57 +0000 UTC]

yep. he just /pretends/ to be angry untill he's satisfied. unless your orochimaru.

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Anukis [2005-06-15 21:33:15 +0000 UTC]

It's cute! Hehe I liked when Naruto freaked out, thinking he was kid-napped or something :3.... nice.

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