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Published: 2005-06-18 18:57:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 2433; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 711
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Well, this is the eleventh page.And I would like to make a point here. I hate it when people write in fanfics that Naruto gets beat up by people much, much weaker than him without any evidence of him putting up a fight. So when you see this page, do not think that this is the same situation. Because there is a reason for the fact he is getting the crap beat out of him and not putting up a fight. Ergo, do not flame me for Naruto seemingly becoming a sissy.
Thank you, and enjoy the newest page!
(As a side note, I am having way too much fun with crosshatching.)
Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto.
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ku ku ku.
(dirty mind) that kunai looks like summink funny ku ku ku
love the doujin though, it ruls
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It's good you like cross-hatching 'cuz I hate it.
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NOOOOOO POOR NARU-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE PAGES ONEGAI-SHIMASU
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That'sa lotta exclaimation points... O___O
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poor Naru-chan~ ;___; ne I love the dotted effect in the last panel, and the fight scenes too.. ne isn't that the same girl from last time? O_O grrrr 
Awesome line shading...the kunai looks a little weird. Well I suppose one reason that Naruto does not fight back is to show that he isn't different like a demon because demons have an unfair advantage, in this case, strength in a battle. but he's sorta standing his ground here. SASUKE KICK THEIR ASS!
Great work!
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Yup, that's her. Did that on purpose.
And that's not the reason he's not fighting back, just to let you know. But I geuss that could be part of it.
Thankyuu, isis-chan!
*die evil fangirls DIE*
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mwahaha! yes! Ur welcome Raspberry-chan!
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The last panels stippling really adds a nice effect to the tone of the scene. There's a lot of details to the background and scenes. I totally love it.
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Thank you very much! It took me a while ^_^;
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Yes! Stab them goodXD! ohhh! cant you just feel the rage building inside his youthful heart?! I'd like to show thoes bitches a thing or two...sept I'd be using something a little more dangerious then a kunai *takes out giant windmill shuriken and hides in shadows*
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KILLLLLL THE BITCHES. Kyayhahaha. *eheheh* But continuing on...
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YES!! STAB THEM THROUGH THE HEART!! DoooOOOoo iitttt..... -cough- yes. Um... :3 I lurve your doujinshi. It's so... so... so gooooood. By the way, that one girl in the first pannel in the middle (and in the second pannel who kicks Naruto), she looks a little like Sakura o.o... mehbeh it's the hair. Yeah. It's probably the hair :B. Demo, I don't think Sakura would actually ever do that unless Ino possessed her or something o.O;.... hehe. Please continue :3.
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*shakes head* Noooo. I like Sakura. No way am I making her that mean. Actually, you'd recognize the girl in the middle from my last doujinshi. 
Is my doujin really that good? XD I've never thought so... *hug* Thank you, anukis!
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Hmm... yeah. I thought you wouldn't make Sakura like that. xD I love the title "Sadistic Crazy Fangirl" hehe, so silly. And yes! You have a wonderful doujinshi going! Not only is the plot good but your drawings are nice too, so that's what makes it good 
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the kunai looks dangerously long in the last panel o_O'' the dots are really good on the last panel OoO!!
girl in the first panel, middle, the same girl in your first comic OoO.
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*grin* Yup! That was the point. *jumps about* I'm glad someone caught that.
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Shes a sorta noticable character thats why ^^
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