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NASKdoujinshi [2005-08-03 21:28:37 +0000 UTC]

I love the middle panel where Naruto is looking back over his shoulder. The transition between Naruto's expression in the middle and the next panel is particular good. I like how you portray him having a sensitive, somewhat surprised face and then a glad face bordering on tears of joy at Sasuke's words. I also thought the inking on the figures and the background tones were awesome. ^_^

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SangoChan56 [2005-07-18 19:46:32 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Momodesu you do get better whenver I see you too XD

Very lovely page I feel sooo bad for Naruto-kun T^T but it can't be helped i'm not to creator of the story.... but I wouldn't done a depressing one too XD

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Momodesu [2005-07-18 02:28:49 +0000 UTC]

xDDDDDDDDDDDD WWOOOOOOOOOOWW~~

YOU'RE GETTING SO MUCH BETTER EVERY TIME I SEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUR STUFFFFFF~~ xDDDDDDD

Ahahaha ... the bottom left pannel looked painful. Do you have an editing program like photoshop on your computer? If you do, I can lend you some pre-made speed lines and stuff and teach you how to apply them. xDD;

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lovebaby [2005-07-17 16:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Oo, you're going camping? Have a great time. Looking forward 'til the day you get back with lotsa updates ^^

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Ly-Metall [2005-07-17 09:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Awww! I love it! T_T And I want to see more sooo much! ;_;
Have a nice time on your vacation x3 Maybe something will inspire you *_*

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gyakuten [2005-07-17 04:00:39 +0000 UTC]

I read the pages you posted up today. Clever reasoning for Naruto not able to fight back :]. it's great how you're filling up the white space with backgrounds ^____^

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Anukis [2005-07-17 03:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Whooo looks like you have fun in that last panel on the left >.>... muwahahaha... the cold hard truth that Sasuke doesn't love those girls and NEVER will because he was totally MADE for Naruto -strikes yaoi-fan-girl-pose- oh yes! xD I <3 your doujinshi and I really can't wait till you get to update again :3.
<3

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Mitsu-Bishie [2005-07-17 02:10:58 +0000 UTC]

NYAN~ yay u updated!!! :dances: lol

poor naru-chan!!! T.T

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BloodRubiesNata [2005-07-17 01:48:01 +0000 UTC]

It's so great ;-; I HOPE TO SEE MORE. I love your doujinshi ;-; it's so awsome. I can only hope to do one like that one day ;-;

I can't wait for you to get back and for me to see more! ^^ You're doing wonderfully!

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