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raspberrydad — BLUE, part one

Published: 2015-07-02 08:39:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description part 1 of a poem i wrote about a dream i had last night
split into two because i reached sais canvas limit


i had a dream last night that in the middle of the forest tinted blue

sitting on a bed was me and you,

you told me about your kids as we sat and looked at the stars.

you told me not to let anyone break my heart.

‘said he couldn’t hurt me no more anyway,

not when we’re miles away.

you told me to keep my chin up and my head high

not to droop down when the endgame was nigh.

when you spoke to me it felt like thought

only it wasn’t i controlling what was brought.

your hair was white and your eyes were a color i’d never seen;

your voice was smooth and your words were keen.

you warned me about the future in a roundabout manner

and said that all i need is what really matters.

when you departed from the forest tinted blue,

you told me that all i am is you.
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Comments: 8

daisyfangs [2015-07-03 03:08:02 +0000 UTC]

ohhh my god this is so pretty i love the shapes and colors and your handwriting
and the poem is really really nice im dying

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raspberrydad In reply to daisyfangs [2015-07-03 16:47:41 +0000 UTC]

:^OOOOOOO thank u omg???? i dont rlly like how i was wrting tho because its so stretched out i only use that handwriting when im completely awake lmao

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daisyfangs In reply to raspberrydad [2015-07-03 18:32:26 +0000 UTC]

no prob!!!!
it's super pretty tho it's perfect for the poem and the pictures :'^0

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MeowTownPolice [2015-07-02 17:11:19 +0000 UTC]

I love thatu used simple colors but they all work so perfectly together

I am bad at poems ;-;

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raspberrydad In reply to MeowTownPolice [2015-07-02 17:35:56 +0000 UTC]

omg thank u??? holy BLOrt

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randomcivilian23 [2015-07-02 15:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Woah the art and poem are reeaallly good!

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raspberrydad In reply to randomcivilian23 [2015-07-02 17:36:09 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaa thank you!!!

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randomcivilian23 In reply to raspberrydad [2015-07-02 17:57:16 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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