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[yeah, all I've got to say is epic, okay that's a lie I've got more to say. I have been looking forward to doing a picture like this. just imagine, titans of colossal magnitude duking it out while Kate is in the fray. well, lets see how this epic battle commences.]Kate's Log:
BRady loomed over me like a massive guardian.
the dinosaurs bellowed at him, exchanging turns in which to exchange roars.
Brady snarled. he smashed his fist in the ground and roared so loud, it made the dinosaurs cringe.
but then they lunged at him.
Brady scooped me up just in the nick of time and held me above them as Brady under dogged one and kicked the other in the face.
the one reached its head around and bit Brady in the leg and pulled him down.
Brady roared and used the other foot to kick him in the face again.
he hit the ground with a thud but kept a steady grip on me, not to tight and not to loose, very gentle. I actually felt safe in his grip.
one jumped onto Brady and tried to bite him around the neck.
Brady just made it so his left leg was holding open one part of the jaw while his free hand held open the other part.
I looked over to see the other one charging for me.
"Brady!" I shouted
he looked to my side.
he quickly did a flip and caused the two dinosaurs to crash into each other.
Brady stood up, defensive and ready for another assault.
the two dinosaurs were regaining their focus and roared in agony.
Brady. then looked to his left.
then suddenly another massive carnivore red eye jumped out and almost bit my head off.
Brady pulled me out of the way and caused the dinosaur to flip head over heals and smash into the ground.
the dinosaur flipped up and all three came charging at us.
Brady braced for impact.
one attempted to ram Brady in the chest, but Brady punched him in the face and sent him toppling over, while another jumped in the air and landed onto Brady biting him on the solder.
Brady roared and used his free arm to rip him off and throw him into another red eye.
Brady stomped his foot and roared very loudly, saliva flying out.
then out of the corner of his eye, Brady saw another coming but Brady was to slow. it rammed him in his side and caused him to fly through the trees.
Brady rolled down a small stone decline.
Brady managed to claw the ground to make himself to stop falling.
he shook his head and looked back up.
one of the dinosaurs burst through the trees and attempted a jump attack.
Brady side stepped and the dinosaur face planted into the rocky earth.
another came bursting out. and Brady did a forceful uppercut that sent it flopping backwards.
then the last one jumped out and landed onto Brady, trying to bite him on the head. Brady heaved its jaws open with his elbow and fist prying it open. he then twisted his arm sharply to make it flip on its side.
Brady took a log near by and smashed it over the dinosaur's head.
it groaned in pain.
one of the others jumped onto Brady's back. it dug its claws into Brady's back.
Brady roared and grappled it by the jugular. he then ripped it off of his back and slammed it onto the ground.
while the others were recuperating Brady pried its jaws open, stuck his foot so it was holding the bottom jaw down. he thrust his hand very quickly and broke its jaws.
it flopped its head and its mouth hung nastily unnaturally.
Brady then took a very large Rock in his free hand and slammed it down onto the dinosaur's neck.
the one was finally dead.
then one of the other dinosaurs came and attempted to bite Brady in the side.
Brady used his massive tail and smashed it in the face and sent it toppling over.
Brady looked behind him and noticed they were very close to a sheer cliff.
he looked back to see the other dinosaur bolting at him.
Brady was quick enough to side step out of the way and the dinosaur was trying to stop.
it managed to stop just at the edge.
Brady gave it a forceful nudge off the edge and it fell down into the ravine.
Brady snorted at it as it fell.
then finally the biggest one was getting up.
it shook its head and looked at us.
it roared very loudly.
then it charged at us.
brady braced for impact.
but the dinosaur was to strong.
it rammed Brady in the chest and sent him back several feet.
it then charged so hard once again.
it sent us all into the cliff.
we fell.
I screamed
I felt like it was going to be over.
but on the way down. Brady was still punching the dinosaur.
the dinosaur was still trying to bite him as well.
on the way down. we hit several small outcroppings of stone.
eventually we hit one so hard Brady actually lost grip of me and I fell.
I screamed
then i fell into a small pond.
I lifted myself up with my forearms.
I shook my head as I saw some small dinosaurs startled by my dramatic entrance.
I got up quickly.
suddenly I felt an enormous quake of the massive red eye dinosaur falling behind me.
I eeped in startlement.
I began to book it out of the pond, the massive dinosaur shaking itself off and charging after me.
I quickly turned around to see it slowing down and stalking me.
I tripped and fell on my back. I quickly looked back up to it and never lost sight of its eyes.
it roared ferociously at me.
red saliva flying everywhere.
it made an attempt to get closer, but suddenly behind me the ground shook mightly.
I looked back to see Brady standing there.
his fists were clenched.
black and red blood covered them.
then right after that, the body of the other red eye came down. it landed close by on the right side of us. its skull had been smashed
the last, biggest red eye looked at Brady.
Brady snarled
it did to.
it let out a massive bellow.
and Brady returned the favor.
Brady then charged pass me and tackled the dinosaur.
he had it in a head lock.
it struggled to get free but to no avail.
Brady pried its jaws open with his jaws.
he began to twist...
and
SNAP!
its jaws were crushed.
Brady stood up.
the body did not move.
but suddenly the body jumped up and rammed brady.
this came as quite a shock.
Brady quickly took it by the neck. and threw it over his solder.
then slammed it on the ground, causing a small shockwave.
then Brady took it by the tail.
then by the neck, with his other hand.
he heaved the dinosaur on his solders like a sack of potatoes.
he then lifted the hulking moster in the air. the light was just right it made the scene picture purfect.
Brady roared so loud as he held the massive demon over his head.
he then gave a severely sharp twist,a nd broke the spinka cord and neck.
he then threw the body on the ground.
he then used his fists to punch right into the body and rip out its vitalities.
with gore dripping hands and a bloody muzzle.
Brady put a foot on his conquered quarry. he inhaled, rand roared, he roared three times. the third was the longest and most powerful.
he then got off of it and begna to breathe heavily.
I looked at him.
he looked at me.
I could see him smile at me.
he then walked towards me.
I was kind of scared.
but then, as I saw him cokme at me, he kneeled down right in front of me.
he wiped off his gore covered hand and extended it.
"climb on, I will take you to the others." he said
I just about fainted.
I slowly climbed into his hand.
it was so warm and welcoming.
he then got up and began to walk through the jungle.
we were quiet for some time.
I then had to say it.
"Brady.... that was AMAZING! how did you do taht I mean you were fantastic! and you... you... you came back for me." I said
as he walked he looked over to me.
"I would never leave a friend behind. not when I have this kind of power at my disposal." he said
I was quiet.
I was amazed.
I had no idea someone like this existed.
he came back for me.
I don't recall a time when someone has done that for me. it was always every man for himself. he killed, THREE massive apocalyptic demons and injured himself for me.
I think I made a friend.
"Brady..." I said
"hm?" he said
"thank you... for saving me." I said
Brady smiled.
then I paused
"we need to talk when we get a chance." I said
I needed a lot of explaining from him.
I need to know more of the truth.
[and... end scene. how did you guys like my epic fighting scene hm? I usually am horrid with things like this but I think this one turned out okay. I have to admit I borrowed a little insight from King Kong but come on, it turned out awesome right? and I give all credit to the jaw snap finisher to Peter Jackson, and King Kong for doing so. now that you saw this epic struggle, you just wait... this is just the beginning.]
Kate Belongs to
Brady and all else ish MINE!
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Comments: 18
kovat [2008-10-20 11:53:37 +0000 UTC]
wow Brady is munching them Scalys! and look at we little Kate squeming...lol
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RavarokJudge In reply to kovat [2008-10-20 17:22:43 +0000 UTC]
lol!
Brady: "Kate I had no idea you could scream so loudly."
kate: "shut up plz"
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RavarokJudge In reply to ryfvs [2008-10-20 17:17:41 +0000 UTC]
I feel my teeth are my epic win
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ryfvs In reply to RavarokJudge [2008-10-20 17:20:54 +0000 UTC]
YES THEY ARE
And blanham's epic win must be his FEET
I'm always telling him how much I wuv the feet...
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RavarokJudge In reply to ryfvs [2008-10-20 17:25:04 +0000 UTC]
he indeed does draw epic feet.
and... you has great feelers?
I can't remember what you called them.... mustaches? lol
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ryfvs In reply to RavarokJudge [2008-10-20 17:28:19 +0000 UTC]
feelers?
They are called Frim
Yeah, they are epiclly.... bizarre!
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RavarokJudge In reply to ryfvs [2008-10-20 17:38:51 +0000 UTC]
lol no offense friend no offense ment
I call them epic! 8D
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The-First-Ace [2008-10-19 14:17:20 +0000 UTC]
I really like how he holds Kate and just her tail is sticking out on the other end. XD
And for the story, awesome written, a great thrilling fighting scene. Good work!
And yes it has something King Kong like.
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RavarokJudge In reply to The-First-Ace [2008-10-20 17:18:22 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much!
I was so excited to do this one!
and the next chapter is one with a little more work put into it in my opinion.
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