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RavenDrakil — Breaking his own chains p9
Published: 2009-08-06 21:10:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1761; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 24
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All has ended well.As a note, this has nothing to do with what will happen between this two that will make everything to go wrong. we'll see the reason when the story advances.
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I hope she tickles you again!! Also I hope your enemies don't find out!!
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And a part from the other comment, if you liked seeing me tickled be around at the end of October because, like I said in my journal, there will be something that maybe you'll like.
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Whaaat!? You are evil!
Well, I don't want to spoil the story but stay around, because she will do a lot in the story.
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Heh, that was fun. Turnabout is fair play, after all!
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Yep, it's true, even in that case Raven hasn't done anything to Xelloin before but well... I suppose Raven getting it was a matter of time.
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Very cute and funny comic. Love the relationship Raven and Xelloin have.
...Lady Drakil
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I'm glad you like it ,this two are really close now.
Haha, this part was great in my opinion, Raven doesn't really care about commments of his "feminine side" but here he decided to play Xelloin's game too.
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Yes, they are.
I thought it was funny, and cute. X3
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(Instead of commenting on individual pages, I thought I'd comment on the story as a whole on the last page)
What a cute story! ^_^
Quite a surprise to see Raven getting some of his own treatment (a rarity indeed), and even the Blood Queen getting some? Oh dear.
Overall, a great chapter to see! Hope to see more!
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No prob Greenjack, if you are getting all the points of the story I'm happy to read your thoughts on the last page.
Thanks! I tried to make that part cute. I really wanted to make him getting it from long ago but I couldn't came up with how and who that I liked. I don't know if the bloddqueen part will actually appear but only a little few will have the chance to get her in their hands.
More on the way, hope you'll like them too.
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I'll try commenting on all of these but I have to say.
I was just about to go to bed last night and updated my messages one last time seeing two new comic pages from you and I had to sit and refresh until another page came and another.
Reading through them and seeing the relationship The Blood Queen and Raven have is lovely. I don't know why but it seriously made me feel warm and happy. XD Now I'm really starting to wonder what happened and why she's become corrupted and changed. Poor Raven must really find it hard.
Hahah, Raven seems so easy to tease at times, but in his weakened state, I'm not surprised. I think it's cute he does rely on her even if he may feel embarrassed about it...especially being carried like a wounded woman. ;D
Over all, this comic is wonderful. I will try commenting on each page. ^^ Hahaha.
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And I'll love to read your thoughts Kate! Just take your time.
Haha, sorry, I didn't want to let you go to sleep before seeing the comic, XD.
Good to know it, that means I making it well, this two are really close to each other that will make the wrong point to be worse. What will happen is not the usual situation you would see a man and a woman involved, who knows, maybe I'll receive bad comments for it, but well this is a serious story with unusual chars and bad things happen. You'll see what will happen.
Yep, he has this innocent part of him, XD. And of course he relies on her, he really don't mind comments about his "feminine side" haha, but here he is playing Xelloin's game too, specially after hearing her answer. being carried as a wounded woman will make the council members to find it more weird than him.
Thanks for saying that, like I said I'm looking forward to read your thoughts.
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Interesting comic! Funny to see Raven get a taste of his own medicine by Xelloin. If I'm not mistaken it's also probably your longest one so far? For nine pages it's impressive that the quality didn't drop any, I think I might lose my patience or quality if I was making something that long 
I also have to say I'm growing more fond of Lin the more I see her.
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Haha, I had the idea of making him getting it from long ago, but I couldn't came up with how and who. In Raven defence, all of his "victims" so far enjoyed to be tickled more or less, not his case but it didn't put him safe.
Yep this one a long one, I came up with the story and when I realised I had all the pages prepared, I'm glad quality hasn't drop during the comic.
Lin, Jake and Tasha will reappear in the present when the past part ends, I want to make a good re-meeting so don't worry you'll see more Lin for sure.
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