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RavensQuill — Reflecting Mimi
Published: 2009-12-05 23:48:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 376; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 21
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Description She's watched you from her little corner
With eyes that plead for grace
She's seen the way you look at her
That smile on your face

Mirror, mirror on the wall
Broken in your disgraceful fall
Show her the damnedest one of all

Black thorns now travel along her wrist
Tempting, thirsting for your lips
Willing to give to you assist
With each twist of her wanton hips

Mirror, mirror on the wall
Shattered in your sinful fall
Show her the darkest one of all

Turning, twirling across the floor to you
You think your victory is sure
She has come to collect her due
You are lost in her allure

Mirror, mirror on the wall
Crushed in your lustful fall
Show her the deadliest one of all

Ripping through your own defense
She drinks of your sweet pain
For now you pay to her recompense
Begging to taste her again

Mirror, mirror on the wall
Destroyed in your final fall
Show her the fairest one of all

Reaching your hand to touch cool glass
A reflection is all you see
Perfection in the broken mass
Shards of what you used to be.
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Comments: 8

artistic-poet [2010-01-08 00:02:52 +0000 UTC]

I've said this before, but you write rhyming poems so well!

I love the last two lines of this one... Shards of what you used to be.

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ciaossuu [2009-12-06 00:28:21 +0000 UTC]

;u; You write such good poems. <333

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RavensQuill In reply to ciaossuu [2009-12-06 00:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww Thanks. Mimi is my masterpiece character.

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Tigertatze [2009-12-06 00:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, i wish i could write like this. You know, we (in germany, dont know how its in other countries) learn to interprete poems. But write our own ones? nope..
i really admire you for your poetic talent *bows*

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RavensQuill In reply to Tigertatze [2009-12-06 00:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Really? Why not?

And thank you. It's been a while since I played with my Mimi, but I love what she comes up with. (well most times)

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Tigertatze In reply to RavensQuill [2009-12-06 00:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Dunno, really.

I begin to love what she comes up with too

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RavensQuill In reply to Tigertatze [2009-12-06 01:43:38 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully she is back for good.

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Tigertatze In reply to RavensQuill [2009-12-06 01:52:50 +0000 UTC]

oh yes

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