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Ravenstringsoffate — Burn
Published: 2010-12-07 18:24:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 225; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description This fiery feeling warming my heart
Makes me feel like nothing could tear us apart
My heart in your hand and yours in mine
Feeling that everything around us is divine
We sear our lips in a passionate kiss
This is just the beginning of bliss
Each laugh from you chimes like a bell
I can't even remember when I first fell
For your butterfly touches that are so amazing
When you smile my soul is blazing
That's why I am sure I am burning
But I am happy to burn in this inferno of love
With you forever
So let us sink into the flames of whatever end together.
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Comments: 3

Magic-fan [2010-12-07 18:28:10 +0000 UTC]

I love the concept of this piece, it has a unique touch to it that really drew me in. The steady rhyme scheme also helped portray the message and make it even more appealing.

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Ravenstringsoffate In reply to Magic-fan [2010-12-07 18:33:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading!

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Magic-fan In reply to Ravenstringsoffate [2010-12-07 18:39:31 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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