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Published: 2010-01-15 21:20:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 589; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Description Each passing day
You grow
More cynical
More ugly
More abstruse.
You used to be
One of the crowd,
Now you blame it
For your flaws.

Fuck off.
You never knew a thing
Above the common man.

Your work expires by the minute,
Your heart is long dead.

Piss on my grave,
Your world is not my end.
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Comments: 10

R-Bans [2013-09-03 21:58:48 +0000 UTC]

I love your work... you've got a new follower!

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urban-barbarian [2010-01-20 05:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Terrific color and mood. You rock. I've been loving these posts.

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RaVeNuS9 In reply to urban-barbarian [2010-01-22 04:00:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Staiceyx [2010-01-16 11:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey!
feature : [link]

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RaVeNuS9 In reply to Staiceyx [2010-01-17 02:14:09 +0000 UTC]

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batorr [2010-01-15 22:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Nice...!!!

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RaVeNuS9 In reply to batorr [2010-01-17 02:14:41 +0000 UTC]

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spoems [2010-01-15 21:42:43 +0000 UTC]

virulently seductive

Your work expires by the minute

that line is so thrilling and unpretentious, you always go so deeply inward with a scalpel.

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RaVeNuS9 In reply to spoems [2010-01-17 02:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Coming from you, this means a lot.. You are one of my favorite living poets. Hands down, no second thoughts, you got an exquisite gift.

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spoems In reply to RaVeNuS9 [2010-01-17 23:16:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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