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Raybuggybug — My Heart isn't Whole if You Leave

Published: 2016-05-31 05:11:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 514; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Description More ulquihime |D I tried to make realistic hair. How'd I do?

I wonder though,
Does anyone remember when I made Ulquihime art way back when?

Edit: the heart always bugged me before with how shiney if was. I changed its appearance.
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jemgirl [2016-05-31 05:52:57 +0000 UTC]

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I understand what you were trying to do, but I'm not sure if the heart is right.

I can see the light and hope and love on her side and how she is leaving him along, and in dark and with the broken part of his heart, but I kinda feel like the heart should be flipped.

That was my first impression, but the more I look at it, I think it's good the way it is.

Her hair carries the light very well. He's melting into the dark quite evenly despite his white skin. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Now I'm back to the heart again. I see the same progress and divide happening there too. Which helps convey what is really going on here. So it's one of the key parts of this drawing. But I feel like it could be a bit more refined around the edges.

Over all, it's very good piece. Thanks for sharing. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Shadow-Walker-22 [2016-05-31 12:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done

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Raybuggybug In reply to Shadow-Walker-22 [2016-06-01 02:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^u^

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Shadow-Walker-22 In reply to Raybuggybug [2016-06-01 13:40:03 +0000 UTC]

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