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Raychilwls β€” A Lovers Lost Cause
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Description "What if you lost the love of your life.
What if you never knew if that person was definitely the one for you.
Would you go to lengths beyond a thought to get to them,
To see them, to speak to them, to love them and hoping they love you back.
What if time has past and the feelings of forever are down to seconds.
The love of your life moves on from what they have felt.
How can something so strong dwindle down to a pile of dust.
Could love have past the test of time and do they still love what is not there in front of them?
Who decides love?
Who makes the rules and who can break them to their own will.
Wrapped in the love you want and surrounded by a different type of love, not good or bad, just different. Would you settle for the one closer, or would you go after the one that got away?
The age old saying "the one who got away" in a literal state for me.
What in your mind makes you settle for the one that is in the now, rather than the one that is in the future.
What would make someone settle for the easy road.
Why not take the gravel dirt road that goes the darker path, its harder to see, and it takes longer to get to the destination, and it is bumpier.
But hey... You have head lights, you have the time, and you have shock absorbers.
What if you could have your dreams answered, would you go the dangerous route, choose the one who got away, not knowing they will love you back, not knowing if you will be with them, because they love you so much and want you back.
Or will you take the paved road, in the day time, and you can see the end of the tunnel. No bumps, no darkness, no loss, just easy.

Which one you choose makes or breaks the rest of your life.
Pain and suffering, Love and happiness.
Last few feet before the fork in the road, think fast."


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-Raychil Willow-Light Sandoval

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Comments: 11

Jinsei-Koi [2007-05-27 03:26:56 +0000 UTC]

wow... got to say... i love that. i can very much relate to it. very well wrote...

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Raychilwls In reply to Jinsei-Koi [2007-06-12 02:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Than you so much.

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Kategra [2007-01-04 06:04:48 +0000 UTC]

I think about the one that got away, try not to, but I can't stop the dreams. I don't want to have feelings for someone I have no chance of being with, and time changes people, what I love is probably just a memory. And staying where I am, the easy road, the comfortable love, is complicated too, i wouldn't just lose a love i'd lose a best friend, and a way of life. Your "poem" made me think of all these things. It hit home with a lot of things, even though you weren't specific, which makes it better, I think, cause everyone can find their own meanings and memories in it.

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Raychilwls In reply to Kategra [2007-01-13 05:37:16 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU soooooo much. For something that I have written about my own life, and generalize it, and you to say these things, WOW... makes me love my writing, my life and I feel so happy and overjoyed to hear you say those things. Thank you so much, you do not know how much this means to me.... truely.

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littlegreencow [2006-12-22 09:04:03 +0000 UTC]

everybody must have thought about this imposible choice once. I have.
think the paved road is safer, and you don't know about the future. Live as if you were going to leave tomorrow...

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Raychilwls In reply to littlegreencow [2006-12-22 12:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, that is one AWESOME line.

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AtherNess [2006-12-21 21:14:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's lovely....

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Raychilwls In reply to AtherNess [2006-12-22 00:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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86Trueno [2006-12-21 02:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I guess I would take the dark path. I would like to see where all the dreams I have will take me, I would like to know if all the things I go through will work out in the end, and to truely see if she still loves me.

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Raychilwls In reply to 86Trueno [2006-12-21 12:55:43 +0000 UTC]

You choose the path harder, and the path that will make you a stronger person. and to know beyond a thought is a gift.

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Raychilwls In reply to 86Trueno [2006-12-21 12:53:52 +0000 UTC]

You choose the path harder, and the path that will make you a stronger person. and to know beyond a thought is a gift.

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