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RaymoreClef — All the Why's
Published: 2005-12-18 03:50:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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Description Why are you running away?
Why did you let me stray?
Why did you ruin my day?
Why do you always have to have you way?

Why oh why can't I cry?
Why oh why cant't you cry?
Why didn't just let me die?
Why did you let me pass by?
Why didn't you question my why?

Why did you save me?
Why couldn't you belive me?
Why didn't you feel me?
Why wern't you there for me?
Why did you have to make this about me?

I guess all the why's in the world
cant surpress love.
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Comments: 51

BlameitonDia [2006-02-18 23:36:48 +0000 UTC]

I have to comment for L.H. She likes this poem...

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-02-24 03:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Ditto from one of my previous statements haha.

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-02-24 16:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Happy now!?

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-02-26 18:19:50 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah....

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-02-26 23:33:59 +0000 UTC]

You sure???

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-03-15 07:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Never really sure sure.

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-03-15 23:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Eh.... right...

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-03-21 01:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Hhaa... your low on words lately.

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-03-21 04:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know....

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-03-25 14:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Hhaa why?

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-03-25 18:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Really, I don't know...

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-04-02 17:50:23 +0000 UTC]

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lidiaa [2006-01-25 15:00:24 +0000 UTC]

a lot of why's in your soul.....at first sight looks so simple...but i guess is full of deep meaning...all the lines begin with that .. short word and very loud spoken-"why" so i gues is the main reason in your poem..a very heavy and painfull question about love . Also you have 3 stanzas..( so..this nr is a perfect one...like an triangle...a perfect corp...also looks with the symbol of trinity)so you all your poem in incadrate in this triangle and in the end...it's a conclusion..your own opinion" i guess all the.." i like your poem i can find a lot of meanings.Well done!

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RaymoreClef In reply to lidiaa [2006-01-25 15:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Jeusu I belvie that is the closest anyone has looked into one of my poems without me haveing to exsplin it to them, thank you so much. I am off to go and check your things. I am so humbled.

By the way yes, it was deep for me to write this, yet so simple. The simplest things in life are sometimes the best to write about. If it was hard to talk abotu your feelings all the time, none of them would ever get out.

Thanks again.

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lidiaa In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-25 18:09:38 +0000 UTC]

good point..and welcome it was't an effort for me..just saying in a straightforword way

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RaymoreClef In reply to lidiaa [2006-01-26 13:34:04 +0000 UTC]

Well i still show you great respect for your assumptions. Thank you.

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Hanaakari [2006-01-11 06:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Hrmm.. Interesting....... i thinkest you question too much

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RaymoreClef In reply to Hanaakari [2006-01-16 18:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah well a theme tis a theme.

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SpArKl3Rz1 [2006-01-05 07:27:51 +0000 UTC]

That's really depressing, but in a good way ^.^

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RaymoreClef In reply to SpArKl3Rz1 [2006-01-06 01:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Hmm depressing... yes i get that - but still - you are great... its horrible - but in the best possible way...

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SpArKl3Rz1 In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-06 07:06:14 +0000 UTC]

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BlameitonDia [2006-01-01 05:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Why Ray why?

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-01 05:38:47 +0000 UTC]

I are not sure... actually I am - notice its not an off the cuff one..

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-01 05:40:51 +0000 UTC]

It's funny actually, I don't know why, but it is.

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-01 11:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Its funny? Hmm,... I think i need to rethink it...

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-01 19:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Well not bad funny....

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-06 01:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm?

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-06 01:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Good funny!!! You know... no you don't... gaaah!!! Forget it...

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-16 18:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Calm down... calm dont dont want you to blow your little gasket or something.

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-16 22:27:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm fine... I'm sure of it...

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-20 14:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah your fine... I like to see that...

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-21 04:24:22 +0000 UTC]

I AM!!! Watch...

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-23 19:41:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah yeah bounceing ball... I am sure thats my new fav emotcon... hehee...

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-23 23:56:28 +0000 UTC]

.... Trampolin lover....

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-24 14:19:37 +0000 UTC]

And so what if I am?

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-25 02:07:21 +0000 UTC]

I just think it's funny...

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-30 17:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Thast ok I can be funny right?

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-30 19:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you can be.

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-30 19:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Yay1

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-01-30 23:40:02 +0000 UTC]

No, 2....

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-01-31 13:49:11 +0000 UTC]

UBER 3

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-02-01 03:56:00 +0000 UTC]

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2006-02-06 16:39:14 +0000 UTC]

whats that for?

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2006-02-06 23:30:49 +0000 UTC]

NVM

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Sea-Fox [2005-12-19 00:24:57 +0000 UTC]

hiyas nice job ray!!!!

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RaymoreClef In reply to Sea-Fox [2005-12-19 00:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! I liked it and was happy with it.

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Sea-Fox In reply to RaymoreClef [2005-12-23 05:54:24 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you are hapy with it.. ^-^

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RaymoreClef In reply to Sea-Fox [2006-01-01 03:37:11 +0000 UTC]

I are i are...!

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MaidenOfTheRings [2005-12-18 13:43:45 +0000 UTC]

where is the part with the song lyric thing? and by did you start singing it anyway

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RaymoreClef In reply to MaidenOfTheRings [2005-12-18 23:40:22 +0000 UTC]

The first line is an Incubus lyric i belive. I am not sure though... and i liked the rhymeing. I was like day, way, stay, away... and i finally desided to put them all thoghter. I dont know..really..

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