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RaymoreClef — In the End
Published: 2005-08-17 04:00:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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I can't see you from here.Are you even there anymore?
How far did you exit reality?
Is the edge of the world,
your doorstep?
Vertigo by absence.
Absence thru Choice.
Eventhing matters nothing,
exsept this fact.
Single solitary essence,
truth be told it in clairty.
Where will you be in my end?
Where will you be in the end?
Where should I be in the end?
Who should I be in the end?
In a whole?
I want to be,
in all truth,
to be,
the one,
in the end!
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Comments: 29
yet another greta poem by mah buddy!
but...
"exsept" should be 'accept" the wya its used in the sentence.
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hmm... i'll check it, but thanks missy. Glad you liked another one.
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Hee hee Still you favorite almost everything I do, and I apperciate that.
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well u deserve the faves. ur very talented at writing.
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Well thank you, for this and for when you said I was respectable on another comment. I say that becasue when i was commenting back it closed on me... ha.
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I like this one! I really like all of your stuff really... 
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You're welcome... and I also forgot something....
My dear big Brother.... WHERE THE HECK IS YOUR DRAWINGS!?!?!?
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Yes I know I know, But I just worked a 80 hour work week. I owe you so much. I am sorry.
They will come I promice. I know you have heard that before but they are coming. I am looking at them right now beside my bed.
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I know you're working an' all, but at least put one up that's finished... I don't want to rush you really if you're still drawing it... Art takes time... but at least skip one night of commenting and use that time to scan a drawing...
It's promise anyway....
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OK ok you get you wish madame - in just a minite i will be off to do it. I need to potty then off i go.
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You dork... I really needed to know that...
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Well I in the process of scanning them as I do the comments and you are going to be, amazed I think/hope.
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Well I hope you put them in soon....
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an you dig it, I can dig it, Can you dig it I can dig it.. (breaks into old school rap song he dont really know the lyrics to)
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Heh... get online. Something strange and funny to tell you.
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oooooo.very cool'lo...^.=.^ awesomeness right here people. ^.=.^
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Thank you thank you. Gratsi Gratsi, 
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hehehhe..it's all right. ^.=.^ 
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Good no hard feelings for takeing so long. 
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riiiightttt... ^^
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Who or what is this pointed towards? As always, your poem's great and kind of inspiring. Btw, I've made my profile english
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Well thank you (about the whole english thing). I mean, I look at it and dry to figure it out and I have like no clue sometimes. BUt other then that, thanks for the comments on the poem. I am not sure how that ties into my life right now, but basicly its for everyone who has people who say they are with them, in any sence of the word, but when push comes to shove they leave you behind. Also it is about how people travel so far from what makes them happy, just to spare the heartache later. Is a double symbolism thingy.
PS - Quit being away on the Messanger.
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