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RaymoreClef — Puzzleing Riddle
Published: 2005-08-29 05:33:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 264; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Like a Needle to the Thread
I run to the point.
Shuffle the mortal toil,
Life life to its happy medium.

Comprimice,
the word for the day!
To use it in a sentence.
My life one big...
Comprimice.

Skip to center.
The core of my reality.
Epicenter of my being.
Focus of Distinction.

Craveing Ease of Mind
Peace of Soul
and a heart singing true.
Where be these things?

Abstrace Parables?
Mimiced Literature.
Predetermined thought process?
Media Mindstorm?

Dare I say not?
These ideals burn to to cinder.
But to cure, prehaphs not.
For no simple answer comes.

To Ease my mind would be to Fail.
A Peace of Soul would bring Choas.
And most importnently,
My Heart, is horse from Previous Screams.

What fills then the void?
How may I comprimice these things?
To be true nature or vivid Deviant.
Sway from the beaten path.

This I propose,
you may take as it were.
I sence a change.
No one single epidemic changed.

However, the aspects of my condidion mended.
How may I cool the burn?
Or control the fire?
Maybe even quench the thirst?

The anwser is simple, Distraction.
Its a fighting plea.
But, maybe the answer premotes
what it plans to solve?

To the voctor go the spoils.
He who dares is bliss.
Catch phrase anyone?
They end here.

Ditract me from my pain.
Amend my Torn Soul.
Silence the Peace I fear.
Forcefeed me Chicken soup Manic.

Ironicly, even if able,
Dangoursly so its wrong.
I could and would not ask of this.
But, to hear me out is enough.

As the great Mister he has said before.
I will survive my problems,
But whats the point?
Chastity and Clebisy are Vulgur.
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Comments: 12

BlameitonDia [2005-09-05 02:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Interesting... Lots of compromise... Compromising something?

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RaymoreClef In reply to BlameitonDia [2005-09-06 02:02:01 +0000 UTC]

I am. I so am, but my mysterious cryptic being knows what, and not everyone elce... yet.

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BlameitonDia In reply to RaymoreClef [2005-09-07 12:33:11 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, that's great...

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MaidenOfTheRings [2005-08-30 17:16:49 +0000 UTC]

"resaying over and over again in different ways aboiut what I wanted to feel"? What do you want to feel? My favorite is the ending; the two last verses makes me think about some sort of wish, or maybe as you say; a feeling..maybe both...(but also makes me think about fetching my dictionary, cuz man, there's some big words there) Great work, Ed dear.

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RaymoreClef In reply to MaidenOfTheRings [2005-08-30 23:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you. You know I like big words. Where have you been by the way... anyways. Like it says I need Distraction. Distraction from alot of things and maybe a change of pace.

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MaidenOfTheRings In reply to RaymoreClef [2005-08-31 15:43:37 +0000 UTC]

I've been all around..I took a short break from dA..but I think I'm back. I hope I'm back for now anyway. I was a little shocked from the last note. Well, not a litte, lots. I have to think before writing a reply.

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RaymoreClef In reply to MaidenOfTheRings [2005-08-31 20:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, I am glad you are back. But intent wasnt to be shocked, sorry. I will renote later.

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dheart3 [2005-08-29 19:45:22 +0000 UTC]

It really deosn't make sense... to be exact... It's like it has a destination, but then when you reach the end, it goes nowhere... crazy but cool how you just come up with it...

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RaymoreClef In reply to dheart3 [2005-08-30 00:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Maybe I need to edit it. Technicly it isnt suppose to make total sence, its supposed to be abstract. I will go back and look at it to maybe fix a few things but i belive its as I want it to be. Basicly its asking for a comprimce to something that cant be changed for simple fact of it being something thats not abel to be changed. Other then that its really me just resaying over and over again in diffrent ways abuot what i wanted to feel.

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dheart3 In reply to RaymoreClef [2005-09-05 14:51:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh, strange... Pretty neat, man, pretty neat...

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RaymoreClef In reply to dheart3 [2005-09-06 01:54:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks again.

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dheart3 In reply to RaymoreClef [2005-09-08 13:21:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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