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rayray18 — can i trust once more ...? ...

Published: 2011-03-09 13:27:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 703; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 7
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Description this path i wake on .. its very dark and i'm alone ..
should i run .. should i fight by my own ..
shall i stand .. or risk my self to fall ..
is this who i am .. is this my goal ..
its hard on myself .. its not my fault it is'nt fair ...
why am i here... should i even care ..
i need to find this light .. its my only way out ..
this scares me .. this feeling i cant put out ..
i can't take it .. this feeling is unbearable ..
but i'll stand and fight .. because i am unbreakable ..
i'll fight you .. where are you show me where you stand ! ..
there has been battles here .. blood marks this land ..
should i be scared .. should i just give up ..
i shall hold this hand .. and walk straight up ..
this is just a path .. i see the end ..
there should always be a light .. at a tunnels end ..
whats this voice i hear ? should i fear its wrath ? ..
wait .. it says ..
"youre the light that guides this dark onto a better path.."

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i've being hurt over and over again ... it seems to the point where i think if i get hurt like that once more .. i will srsly lose it .. no one can easily break me .. but a simple promise break can easily shatter my soul ..

thinking to my self i never want to feel the same way again .. never want to be left behind or listen to anyones promises .. yet they try .. and i keep fighting till no ends .. i walk on this path alone .. slashing to whom ever dares to even try to step in my way .. i shall stand and fight .. no one can break me cuz i am unbreakable .. but this heart .. that i carry .. is very fragile and it is in pain and broken .. time will make it heal hopefully .. but if it did or did not .. can i trust it with some one once more ? ... can i trust some one once more? ..

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ok i was really in the mood to draw this .. the poem was made by me in shear 20 minutes after looking at a pic i liked ..
this is not my first time drawing bloody pics but this was my first one with so much blood o.o ... and i still think it needs more >.> ..
i didnt want to give this the blood and gore stay away option cuz i really like it and it would mess up my gallery ._. ..
any ways .. this is me .. on my path that i walk one every day .. and thats the end of the tunnel hope i will reach it some day ..

enjoy :3
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Comments: 826

talon-the-lynx In reply to ??? [2011-03-11 13:56:05 +0000 UTC]

u will see

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 13:57:59 +0000 UTC]

TELL ME! *slashes claws at him*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 13:58:32 +0000 UTC]

*spirit leaves his body and jakes body flops to the floor*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 14:15:07 +0000 UTC]

*stops* jake!

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 14:22:39 +0000 UTC]

*no breathing what so ever*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 14:28:04 +0000 UTC]

jake? *shacks him* jake! *puts head on his chest hearing*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 14:30:46 +0000 UTC]

*no heart beat*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 14:33:42 +0000 UTC]

omg! jake wake up!

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 14:34:30 +0000 UTC]

*nothing*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 14:38:50 +0000 UTC]

did the spirit take his soul? jake wake up! please!

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 14:39:46 +0000 UTC]

*nothing*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 14:43:21 +0000 UTC]

*takes scarf off ,wraps it around fist and places it on his chest* if your there answer .. *scarfs glows*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 14:44:45 +0000 UTC]

*nothing*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 14:57:23 +0000 UTC]

is he dead?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 14:58:06 +0000 UTC]

*suddenly takes deep breath* ....

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 15:02:18 +0000 UTC]

*gasps* jake!

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 15:03:15 +0000 UTC]

*coughs* ray?

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 15:33:17 +0000 UTC]

*hugs you*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 15:52:51 +0000 UTC]

*blushes* r-ray

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 16:01:33 +0000 UTC]

i thought i lost you ..

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 18:50:18 +0000 UTC]

sorry ...

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 19:08:10 +0000 UTC]

its ok .. just glad your alright ..

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 19:11:40 +0000 UTC]

*smiles*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 20:51:49 +0000 UTC]

what happened?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 21:10:11 +0000 UTC]

I...don't know

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 21:17:05 +0000 UTC]

hope it doesnt happen again ..

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 21:21:12 +0000 UTC]

*sneezes and ears pop back up*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 21:28:18 +0000 UTC]

*giggles*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 21:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh great

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 21:31:43 +0000 UTC]

but there cute :3

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 21:37:20 +0000 UTC]

No their not *covers his really fluffy ears*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 21:42:52 +0000 UTC]

if you say so .. though i still think so >w<

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 21:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Even...if their fluffy?

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 21:50:00 +0000 UTC]

that makes them cuter >w<

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 21:52:50 +0000 UTC]

r not ray...

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 22:06:05 +0000 UTC]

why?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 22:06:49 +0000 UTC]

because if they were cute u would glomp me and touch them

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 22:18:56 +0000 UTC]

but i dont want you blushing away now would i?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 22:25:47 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't care...

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 22:31:16 +0000 UTC]

really ? *tickles your ears from the back*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 22:32:55 +0000 UTC]

*leg thumps really fast*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 22:45:50 +0000 UTC]

they really are fluffy * rubes them both while giggling*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 22:47:17 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaah that feels good ray

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 23:02:50 +0000 UTC]

really?^^ *keeps rubbing them*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 23:21:16 +0000 UTC]

sis didn't u say something about rubbing ears what they meant to people like us?

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 23:59:30 +0000 UTC]

ohto some its sexual .. to others its just playful ^^

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-12 00:00:09 +0000 UTC]

<< then...u better stop

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-12 00:20:58 +0000 UTC]

why?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-12 00:21:32 +0000 UTC]

because i'm not taking it playfully

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-12 00:32:41 +0000 UTC]

lol ok ^^ *stops*

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