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rayray18 — can i trust once more ...? ...

Published: 2011-03-09 13:27:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 703; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 7
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Description this path i wake on .. its very dark and i'm alone ..
should i run .. should i fight by my own ..
shall i stand .. or risk my self to fall ..
is this who i am .. is this my goal ..
its hard on myself .. its not my fault it is'nt fair ...
why am i here... should i even care ..
i need to find this light .. its my only way out ..
this scares me .. this feeling i cant put out ..
i can't take it .. this feeling is unbearable ..
but i'll stand and fight .. because i am unbreakable ..
i'll fight you .. where are you show me where you stand ! ..
there has been battles here .. blood marks this land ..
should i be scared .. should i just give up ..
i shall hold this hand .. and walk straight up ..
this is just a path .. i see the end ..
there should always be a light .. at a tunnels end ..
whats this voice i hear ? should i fear its wrath ? ..
wait .. it says ..
"youre the light that guides this dark onto a better path.."

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i've being hurt over and over again ... it seems to the point where i think if i get hurt like that once more .. i will srsly lose it .. no one can easily break me .. but a simple promise break can easily shatter my soul ..

thinking to my self i never want to feel the same way again .. never want to be left behind or listen to anyones promises .. yet they try .. and i keep fighting till no ends .. i walk on this path alone .. slashing to whom ever dares to even try to step in my way .. i shall stand and fight .. no one can break me cuz i am unbreakable .. but this heart .. that i carry .. is very fragile and it is in pain and broken .. time will make it heal hopefully .. but if it did or did not .. can i trust it with some one once more ? ... can i trust some one once more? ..

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ok i was really in the mood to draw this .. the poem was made by me in shear 20 minutes after looking at a pic i liked ..
this is not my first time drawing bloody pics but this was my first one with so much blood o.o ... and i still think it needs more >.> ..
i didnt want to give this the blood and gore stay away option cuz i really like it and it would mess up my gallery ._. ..
any ways .. this is me .. on my path that i walk one every day .. and thats the end of the tunnel hope i will reach it some day ..

enjoy :3
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Comments: 826

talon-the-lynx In reply to ??? [2011-03-09 19:08:55 +0000 UTC]

*head jerks* crap...its coming

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:12:49 +0000 UTC]

*from inside the room* whats that jake?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 19:13:32 +0000 UTC]

*she senses his beast instincts*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:17:49 +0000 UTC]

what the? *opens the door* jake?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 19:18:30 +0000 UTC]

*growls at her*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:20:42 +0000 UTC]

jake calm down ..

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 19:22:10 +0000 UTC]

*takes a step closer to her*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:25:12 +0000 UTC]

*ears tiltes ears back holding ground*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 19:27:08 +0000 UTC]

*lunges at her*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:31:38 +0000 UTC]

jake?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 19:33:54 +0000 UTC]

*growls*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:37:26 +0000 UTC]

*growls back*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 19:39:05 +0000 UTC]

*bites her*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:41:49 +0000 UTC]

ah! *pulls you off*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 19:42:37 +0000 UTC]

*holds head*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-09 19:51:15 +0000 UTC]

eerrrraaah *punches him*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-09 20:28:55 +0000 UTC]

*growls loudly*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 11:06:24 +0000 UTC]

jake snap out of it!

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 12:38:27 +0000 UTC]

*barks*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 12:44:26 +0000 UTC]

*growls*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 13:31:28 +0000 UTC]

*tackles her*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 13:34:46 +0000 UTC]

ah! *flips you over*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 17:20:02 +0000 UTC]

*growls* what can a female like u do *gruff voice*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 17:25:06 +0000 UTC]

i can make you wish to never mess with a female again *growls*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 17:25:31 +0000 UTC]

*laughs evily*

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 17:28:28 +0000 UTC]

*thinks : is he still jake?*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 17:31:03 +0000 UTC]

NOW DO YOUR JOB FEMALE (its not its something else)

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 17:37:14 +0000 UTC]

(i dont get o.0)

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 17:38:07 +0000 UTC]

(its somewhat of like an evil form)

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 17:40:22 +0000 UTC]

(oh i see ... ) *runs towards you* *nails get longer*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 17:43:58 +0000 UTC]

our species is dieng out

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 17:45:25 +0000 UTC]

*stops* .. what?

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 17:46:37 +0000 UTC]

our kind is being overrun by humans

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 17:51:03 +0000 UTC]

demons will walk the grounds again with no fear of humans ... and i am not the first of doing so now ...

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 17:56:50 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* u just want him back don't u well too bad i have taken his body ...and i'm not even his true wolf form i'm just some spirit that saw an opportunity

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 18:11:45 +0000 UTC]

*growls* you messed with the wrong person spirit ..

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 18:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha I can feel the love between u which makes the dispair all the more better

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 18:30:45 +0000 UTC]

o///o LOVE? d-dont make up words or i am gona make you eat it!

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 18:31:09 +0000 UTC]

HA!!! u admit it u do love him don't u

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-10 18:38:50 +0000 UTC]

hes my brother you idiot of course i love him!

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-10 21:03:59 +0000 UTC]

i meant more then that

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 02:24:17 +0000 UTC]

hes my brother nothing more nothing less *growls*

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 03:47:17 +0000 UTC]

LIAR

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 04:20:33 +0000 UTC]

i say nothing but the truth ..

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 04:28:23 +0000 UTC]

I see your future ray

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 04:29:39 +0000 UTC]

no one can see my future ...

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 04:33:43 +0000 UTC]

Liar...

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 04:44:09 +0000 UTC]

i am not ..

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talon-the-lynx In reply to rayray18 [2011-03-11 04:47:05 +0000 UTC]

We'll see about that

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rayray18 In reply to talon-the-lynx [2011-03-11 04:47:52 +0000 UTC]

what do you mean?

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