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Published: 2010-09-18 14:25:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 792; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 13
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story : rayray just ended a battle between her and her big brother (yes for who dosnt know ray has an older brother that wishes ti kill her ) , she did get wombs from her brothers attacks but they were not that bad .. but when ray was getting back home this guy here .. appears out of no where attacking ray saying that he will get his vengeance on rayray for what her dad did ... killing his older sibling to protect ray .. so that battle went on and ray fought as hard as she can but she was worn out from the early battle with her brother .. so that guy "that looks familiar to a anime show that i liked : gave ray that bad cut on her arm ...and the battle continues .. now...
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i am getting invited to so many comic collabs with other artists but i rely dont know how to make a comic or a manga so i thought of using an old seine of rays adventures to practice on and also i needed to practice fighting seines witch also this comic will have so dont miss out ...
ok this is my first ever manga page so please no bashing
the shadings killed me as always
coloring with grays wasn't rely that bad it was kinda easier than what i thought it would be ...
i'm rely bad at using speech bubbles cuse it would make the hole thing look crappy so i used speech clouds or speech fogs as i call them ... they look kinda better ...
and it came out pretty good i guess
too lazy to color the chains >.<
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what will he do with that chain ...
is ray going to survive .. or will she end up bleeding to death ...
find out next .....
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next page : [coming soon]
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Wow nice comic!
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Hirolu! Hirolu! Hirolu!
magnificent art: [link]
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Keep drawing.
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βDonβt underestimate humanβs brain, imagination, and determination.β
If you searching for cartoon, anime, history, wallpaper, animation, photography, anthro or even some clothing design, come visit my
Hirolu! Hirolu! Hirolu!
magnificent art: [link]
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yup i'm still at it ^^
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βDonβt underestimate humanβs brain, imagination, and determination.β
If you searching for cartoon, anime, history, wallpaper, animation, photography, anthro or even some clothing design, come visit my
Hirolu! Hirolu! Hirolu!
magnificent art: [link]
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i will
umm what do you mean
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Nice job. Hope you'll have the next page soon. Keep up the good work. 
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thanks ^^
next page will be up soon
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OMG!!!
This is AWESOME!!!!
I can't wait to the other page
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lol thanks the other page may come out 3 days or maybe 2 from now but if i'm lucky CX ..
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No Problem!!
YAY!!!
The Page will come Soon!!!
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Hey as I at times help my friends on sheer imagination to get things moving send me a question. Believe me I can give well thought out and original characters and stories...
Your shy and older DA ninja brother...
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ummm you mean if i needed help with stories i can always ask you for help ??
sorry i just woke up after a black out and i can hardly understand anything now
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wow guess the black out wasn't as hard as i thought lol
thanks for the offer man sure why not i may hit some art or story blocks in this thanks
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I am not sure which one is my fav just yet...
to many too chose
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[link] this is the dragon emotion account it has most of the emotions in it
just go there and youll find almost all of them in the ID entry
but newer are posted so you may find newer emotions than just the ones that i showed you
and also you can find others in the comment stakes ^^
to know how to use the with out knowing the name easy put your mouse above the emotion you wish to know the name of it then the name will appear with out the 2 keys :: and the word icon DONT FORGET TO WRITE THEM before using the emotion and always remember to preview the comment before sending ..
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lol go and use your powers carefully grasshopper .. you dant want people to get shocked with your new powers of using the .. remember the power is always with in you ...
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Awesome job on the comic & I suck at drawing chains but you're really good at them
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thank you ^^
no your chains are rely good but you used the circle kind of chains the smooth kind that is used in rolling things in but the square kind is used to pull and shove hard things around thats what i drew ^^
dont ask why i know this ... its because i love going fishing with my dad ^^" lol
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Thanks & it sounds like maybe I should use the square kind because Daikirai pulls things to him with his chain & I love fishing I want to start going again.
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i dont know i still think all chains are the same but eeh people want to be complicated
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I agree with you there why must they complicate things so much.
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Yokoshima *Daikirai's mate* hates Diamond's dad because he killed her dad in self deffence well her & Daikirai hates Diamond's whole family.
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oh well rays mom died when ray is just 10 so her dad had to protect ray from the enemys around her and ray killed some one when she was 12 cause her father wasnt around ...
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Diamond mostly killed humans because she learned a hate for them but she calmed down & likes at least some humans now.
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yeah but its ok *hugs you* i got my friend right here i dont need any humans around
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GO RAY RAY GO! YAY RAYRAY YAY!!! KICK HIS ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
welll i felt lyk cheerin u on.... ^^'
n awesome work as eva onee-chan.
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lol thanks rishy XD
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