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Im secret fan of Izayoi seishin ^^'Related content
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Hr face needs a little work. I think it's her eyes-nose-mouth lineup/ratio. But great job overall!
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I clearly disagree with the majority on here. As I am a fan of your work, I find this image, uninteresting visually and not much is going on. I do believe you can do better.
Take first the composition, you have it so that the figure is centered, yet her foot is going off camera and the spacing at the top is different than the bottom. Furthermore, the painting may be a little too overworked. It is our jobs as artists to translate an image. Much like how french can be translated to german. When we work an image, we have to pick and choose what spots we want very finished or more loose.
Secondly, her pose and the angle you appear to have the camera at, does not work. We should see much less thigh. Something like this: [link]
Third, it may help a little to detail only slightly what she may be sitting on. Like a bed. Maybe some pink covers down there. I'm only trying to help. This image falls short, in my opinion. Maybe mess with lighting in the future. Different lighting can convey different feelings. ^ - ^
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^^' Im amateur however thanks you
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Your work is getting there though. Not much further, keep on going~!
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I don't think things will be clean afterward >.>
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girls are icky, so is this. nice skill though.
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Very nice work. Good pose and attention to detail.
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His art work is old school and yet modern. I think I like this better than Linda.
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of course my lady,how could i say no.
Looking very good
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