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readmyspine β€” Blood love
Published: 2004-03-11 09:49:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 33
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Description I carve your name with a bloodied knife
Of pain that spilt on your behalf
My lust for you inscribed in my skin
Another reminder that you’re not mine
And I bleed for such a fantasy
The softest touch from your fingertips
That will never reach my figure like yours
And touch the deepest point within me
The wave in your hair,
The gold in your eyes
Those curves that run for miles
I carve your name with a bloodied knife
As if somehow it’ll bring you to me
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Comments: 13

esion [2004-10-01 13:28:36 +0000 UTC]

reading this again
you never cease to amaze me
i cant help but come back for more.

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readmyspine In reply to esion [2004-10-03 09:57:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks ben

i plan on submitting and writing more in the near future... my activity has been quite low on da recently

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lost-mister-me [2004-03-29 01:55:40 +0000 UTC]

wow.

"My lust for you inscribed in my skin
Another reminder that you’re not mine"

good stuff there. hmm. very....something. dunno what to call it. the end ties back to the beginning well.

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obsidiantear [2004-03-14 02:29:11 +0000 UTC]

: Pulls on her long sleeve shirt and tries to decide why your poems know her so well:

You are still awesome I see.

Some things just don't change.

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crystalgazer [2004-03-13 07:26:11 +0000 UTC]

so powerful and i love it - there is so much meaning behind your words and i can really feel that!
great job -

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silent-screamer [2004-03-12 06:27:57 +0000 UTC]

so emotive ... i luve it!
specially this line: " I bleed for such a fantasy" .... *awsomeness*

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lilitheternity [2004-03-12 03:27:46 +0000 UTC]

very powerful and emotional words, well written.

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tia-the-fairy [2004-03-12 02:24:22 +0000 UTC]

another beautiful creation
beautiful work by a beautiful girl

mmm curves
great work gorgeous

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disavian [2004-03-12 01:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Someone did this... carved my initials into their arm after I had dumped them....



but she was pretty self-absorbed and I felt justified, and got someone... actually quite like you a few weeks or days later despite my intention of staying single.

so this has a big meaning to me, from that side.... although, if it was someone I would care about... that might be different... and almost as scary, yet in a different way.

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i-am-what-i-am [2004-03-11 13:17:57 +0000 UTC]

this is an example of how words can be made into something so beautiful that it is hard for me to read without having to rip my heart out and smash it into tiny pieces....

ie. the emotions it evoked in me are more powerful then i think i can handle....

it is so so so beautiful.... you are suc an amazing writer, you can expresss these feelings so clearly and emotionally!

....keep submitting...

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spot- [2004-03-11 10:03:41 +0000 UTC]

it's strong and well written

good job.

not sure if i like it though.

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Solitude-within [2004-03-11 10:01:05 +0000 UTC]

Very, ver powerful. Beautiful. Well done.

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meatloafsurprise [2004-03-11 09:58:50 +0000 UTC]

maddy, that's beautiful. written amazingly.. i'm encaptured once again by your words. i hope that you're aware of how incredible you are.

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