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Published: 2004-05-01 09:58:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 415; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 42
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Torn and usedStripped and abused
I am falling apart at the seams
I beg for it to cease
And pray for release
As I cower in the corner, shaking
When you'd had your turn
There was more, I learned
And you raped me all over again
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Comments: 15
thatΒ΄s a strong piece, dealing with very intense and negative feelings..
where does this come from?
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well i have never been raped of the sexual kind...
but, i've been abused emotionally and i found some comfort in expressing it through rape
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i wouldnt say "not pleasant". hmm. not to say it is pleasant. it is depressing though and powerful
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not very plesant
but very powerful
beautiful work!
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I think poetically it is excellent...it is very sad...but it is good to express feelings. I just pray that it wasn't written from personal experience and is rather metophorical.
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good piece i really like the first two paragraphs
........ they flow really well - great piece
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my words wouldnt be enough...
beautiful piece
yet
as you say...
not very pleasent
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Hmm... so sad, but very nicely written. I like the rhyme scheme in this one. It's unconventional but flows nicely.
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Dude... very emotive and also very, very depressing. I'm hoping this isn't based on personal experience.
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oh great now its showin up...
i feel like a dikhed
sorry mate
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your commentS are appreciated
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yeh soz bout bein such a blonde bitch lol
well i used to b blonde...
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hmmm i dont no y my thing ddnt show up aye...
but wot i baisically sed was good work...
i like it
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yeh ur rite... not very pleasent
but good word choose n shit like that
paints a great picture (well not great but u no wot i mean)
good work
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