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readmyspine — Finally prepared
Published: 2003-11-30 08:41:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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straying in your unchained statesweeping the fields with your arms outstretched
ready for the end
no longer afraid of losing control.
this is it,
your final show.
the last entry in your existance
staining your fingertips...
breathing in eagerly,
your eyes chant the closing words
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this is the kind of thing that seems to bring chills. the whole idea of 'the end' is evident in this. wow.
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beautiful poem, I really love the way you've worded it, my fav part is "ready for the end/no longer afraid of losing control./this is it,/your final show."
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thank you so much for the comment, i really do appreciate it
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you're quite welcome and anytime at all.. I love commenting on peoples work!
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The last entry in your existance... almost Shakespearian. Nice.
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"no longer afraid of losing control."
... that would be absoutly terrifying to know somebody like that ... or to be like that yourself
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no. some people take masochistic pleasure in it. then again, some people say i'm insane. whatever works. still, that's just my opinion. i can't speak for her.
great poem, by the way.
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