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Published: 2003-11-03 10:09:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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RefrainPull yourself away
Before you can’t help but devour
Save yourself
For something better
Do not seek it
Or seek to see it
Shining upon that divine tray
You don’t want a dirty dress,
Do you?
Entwine your fingers
And take pleasure in the evening
But stay away from the table
The one your beauties crawled onto
Don’t let them defeat you
They aren’t there
But they can be,
If you wish it so.
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Comments: 10
lost-mister-me [2004-03-25 04:37:36 +0000 UTC]
You don’t want a dirty dress,
Do you?
Entwine your fingers
And take pleasure in the evening
yea its sexual in nature. hmm. interesting. i can see this.
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sporkk [2003-11-07 01:05:02 +0000 UTC]
Amazing. I think this could be so much more than just a poem. It'd make a really great song, or maybe a picture; pure white gloves and dress in an otherwise dark picture. Maybe I'm thinking along totally different lines than what you were, but this piece of writing make me feel something.
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SykMyn [2003-11-05 08:32:21 +0000 UTC]
love, pain, darkness, and new life... i really like it.. purety stained in unknown fathoms, short.. simple.. and deep.
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lilitheternity [2003-11-04 02:14:30 +0000 UTC]
you did a beautiful job at capturing the moment.
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tia-the-fairy [2003-11-03 10:30:16 +0000 UTC]
i can't quite get wether you can see her in a dream (day or night) and your talking to yourself about her
or whether you can see her with others and your talking to her
but i'm a bit frazzled atm
sounded great anyway
love you
xoxox
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mr-pantz [2003-11-03 10:22:19 +0000 UTC]
this seems sexual in nature to me...
yeah i'm a bit weird...
don't mind me just go about your business as if i wasn't even here
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