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Published: 2004-01-27 07:31:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description one came along
stayed only a minute before leaving

another
and another
... faces full of excitement

one by one, they leave
disappearing into the crowd
leaving behind their baggage
sitting next to me
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Comments: 14

buildingsLIE [2007-05-20 06:18:35 +0000 UTC]

i love woodford.
I've been 8 times and it just doesn't fail to touch you in some way.
great work.

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fullonemptiness [2004-02-29 10:22:55 +0000 UTC]

True quality writing, so simple yet so powerful, very nice..

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readmyspine In reply to fullonemptiness [2004-02-29 10:47:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i really appreciate that you took the time to read this and leave a comment

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fullonemptiness In reply to readmyspine [2004-02-29 11:28:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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lost-mister-me [2004-02-16 23:14:40 +0000 UTC]

wow. simple. open to much interpretation.

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sporkk [2004-01-30 09:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Simple but beautiful. It conveys such a powerful feeling of loneliness with such simple words. I really like the way you write.

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lilitheternity [2004-01-28 02:26:53 +0000 UTC]

This is a really beautiful piece, i love the simplicity, its very well written.

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manifestation [2004-01-28 01:52:39 +0000 UTC]

lovely

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i-am-what-i-am [2004-01-27 12:43:13 +0000 UTC]

i like this... nice sort, sweet and simple.... i think i remember that nigght!!!!

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silent-screamer [2004-01-27 10:31:42 +0000 UTC]

i admire your eye - an eye which can reveal the beauty in any situation. its a good quality.

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tia-the-fairy [2004-01-27 10:19:39 +0000 UTC]

i love the way you can write about such simple things and make it sound so beautiful
great work
xoxox

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ih8avril [2004-01-27 09:41:12 +0000 UTC]

i like the way you've worded this...it's hard to explain...i'll say it's beautiful but it's more than that..i just can't think of a word

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ashrei-halom [2004-01-27 07:32:24 +0000 UTC]

The imagery of this is beautiful... such a simple, yet wonderful piece of work

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readmyspine In reply to ashrei-halom [2004-01-27 07:33:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you for taking the time to read and comment
i truly appreciate it

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