lost-mister-me [2004-02-15 20:47:03 +0000 UTC]

very simple poem. i like the beginning.

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wrecked [2003-11-11 23:11:07 +0000 UTC]

i liked the first stanza. i liked the second and third less.

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braidy [2003-11-02 04:41:20 +0000 UTC]

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goodmorning [2003-10-22 10:57:47 +0000 UTC]

a beautiful poem, great work

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meatloafsurprise [2003-10-22 07:21:55 +0000 UTC]

just a masterpiece. i feel lighter.

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ruzkin [2003-10-22 02:13:07 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me so much of some moments I've had while walking in the rain - truly beautiful imagery. I love this to bits.

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caffiend [2003-10-21 17:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice. Very nice.

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truckie [2003-10-21 11:47:28 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful. no other words.

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smokeybear [2003-10-21 09:45:22 +0000 UTC]

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i-am-what-i-am [2003-10-21 09:02:15 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing poem madz... brings tears.... and happyness... i feel wierd!

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tia-the-fairy [2003-10-21 08:47:27 +0000 UTC]

hope is a beautiful thing

....so is this poem

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happy-pill [2003-10-21 08:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Hope.

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abuseme [2003-10-21 07:55:15 +0000 UTC]

D

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zaps [2003-10-21 07:01:18 +0000 UTC]

what were you doing at a hospital???
my brother works at a hospital i dont like going in with him cause its too depressing for me (cancer ward)
but yes-- sorry i always get sidetracked
beautiful poem as per usual- you always pick the right words

--rosemary

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sporkk [2003-10-21 06:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Moments like that are so rare, but they're so good when you have them. I hope it all comes true for you.

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spot- [2003-10-21 06:51:19 +0000 UTC]

but what is the message?

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