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Published: 2004-10-10 09:27:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 267; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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You fell in love with a deadly thornAnd before you knew it your heart was torn
We all saw just how it would end
But you pushed on in hope it'd mend
We told you over and over it wasn't right
But you ignored us every night
He picked you up and dropped you hard
And now you're left all broken and scarred
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Comments: 7
very very deep and stright to the point. GREAT job
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this hits me straight to the bone.
sigh. it's a bit too late to turn back time.. 
awesome work, rhythms and the like.
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" You fell in love with a deadly thorn
And before you knew it your heart was torn"
reminds me of that song "every rose has its thorn" by poison. ok that was random.
sounds a lot like something i would write. even though i havent written in a while.
good stuff.
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" You fell in love with a deadly thorn
And before you knew it your heart was torn"
reminds me of that song "every rose has its thorn" by poison. ok that was random.
sounds a lot like something i would write. even though i havent written in a while.
good stuff.
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i really like this poem - short and sweet like tia said - very effective
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short and sweet
i like the seperate couplet stanzas, they work really well for this poem
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