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Published: 2014-02-23 02:38:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 90054; Favourites: 1825; Downloads: 505
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Just look at her.She REALLY doesn't want to go to the dentist.
Poor Pinkie.
This should answer the questions "What is that stain?" and "What programs do you use to draw?"
Coffee, and I use actual pencils and inking pens like a BOSS.
---------For heaven's sake, people.---------
I know the coffee stain is still there. It's deliberate. I kept it in as a joke, 'cause pretty much ALL the other popular pony comickers draw their stuff digitally, so this stuff doesn't happen to them. Funny, yes? HAHAHAHA. IS SO FANNY. MUCH LUL. MANY HUMUR.
I know how to edit things like that out.
I actually went to great lengths to make sure it STAYED there! XD
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Very Accurate, and the drawings were very good
I can tell you pay attention to the show. The joke is very original, I haven't seen anything else like it. I love how Fluttershy reacts, because that is how she would react because she knows that Pinkie NEEDS to go to the dentist. This made me laugh, and I told my parents about it and they thought it was funny to, and they don't even watch the show! I have like 20 words left... Don't know what to say...Okay, This was drawn extremely well, I could never draw anything as good as this. It's pretty cool, and I loved this comic
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Poor Pinkie,
All she DIDNT want was to not get injections in her mouth...
poor thing. I love how it was animated [not really animated but pictured] Poor Pinkie... look at her... shes just saying "HELP ME!" poor thing. But it was pretty good overall. I loved it. Can someone please help me out here? I mean, this is FAIR, right?
Just love these things you make I love love love them but siriously can you make more please? I love your drawings, didn't notice the stain till u mentioned it, lol. SO FUNNY I LOVE YOUR DRAWINGS THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The overall effect is very good.
The colors are excellent. And the bold lining on the characters and how it fits with the similar thickness of the text and lining of the panels makes the image fit together very well. The characters themselves are drawn very well, but I think the color, and the line thickness are what make the image pop out and attract the reader.
The joke itself is old, but that wouldn't matter if it didn't fall flat at the end. It's just the last two panels that are sub-par, because the build up of what the readers expect Fluttershy to do are cut short by a generally meek response.
To make it more effective, Fluttershy could have been very blunt, like lean her body weight into pressing a trap-door button.
Fluttershy had to strongly assert that Pinkie was wrong in order to take the credit that Pinkie offered up by being scared.
The artstyle, color, and essentially all the writing are excellent, but Fluttershy's response was too meek to satisfy the reader, even though it was actually very good.
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I didn't convey that the image is still very funny, and I think the originality is more akin to a 3.5 or 4.0, because the writing is so good.
Also, it doesn't actually fall flat; it was an exaggeration of my point that that detail was less than I can see it could be.
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That was a nice for it right, and so was the wise of it and know it's funny or not, I deserve that was a good piece of comic. Good for the time and something it was fine for the time, then the good comics is the best way to deal with it by others, also we must good for the time, Pinkie scares at injections but it was fine, and so that is good for this comic, & that was cool for it and might we do the best way for this comic was awesome and funny (but not) for something.
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Admittedly, this isn't your best work. While, as usual, your art style, expressions, and use of paneling and font are very well done and a ton of fun to look at, the actual joke is rather lacking, in that, it just doesn't have much of a punchline. The idea of Fluttershy being the brave one, and dragging a cowardly Pinkie off to the dentist is funny and creative, but it doesn't really have a payoff, and isn't quite weird enough to stand on it's own as one of those "so odd it's funny" comics. It needs either more structure leading to a definite joke, or just go balls-out nuts and goofy and let the comedy flow from the ludicrousness of it. This is just in the middle, and the result is something a little underwhelming.
Sorry to be so harsh, I'd have loved to see the idea more fleshed out.
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This isn't a "so odd it's funny" comic, and it doesn't HAVE a punchline that needs to be lead up to.
The humour is similar to my other comic "She Never got the Cider," in the sense that a character is stressing out in a spectacular fashion, and... well, that's kind of the joke!
"She doesn't wanna go to the dentist, look at her freaking out, lol."
Really, it's just one of those dumb comics with no REAL, SOLID joke, but I'm confident I did well.
I only argue because you seem to have based your entire opinion off how YOU think the joke should have been delivered, and what kind of joke was being delivered. I can't tell you you're WRONG, but I won't entirely agree you're quite right either. XD
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Bloody Brilliant comic! It just shows how intimidating a lone needle can be!
Vision- If you were aiming to make her looks scared job well done. The expressions on her face purely show you that she's down right horrified! And Fluttershy's expressions show her unamusement and confusion.
Originality- Never seen this before. Plain and simple.
Technique- Your common style still looks great. Love it!
Impact- I... I got a smile out of this one... which trust me means A LOT!!!
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Also there's a stain in a speech bubble... my monitor isn't that dirty... is it?
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the stain is in the description its coffe
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That I will admit, I didn't read at first.
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lol neither did i at first i knew it coffe
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Trypanophobia: The fear of injections. Chalk another similarity between me and Pinkie...
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Then you'll never accept me as your Doctor!!!
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*runs around in circles*
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*pulls out syringe gun* prepare for the injection of YOUR LIFE!!!
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AAAH! *Puts up a shield with the picture of a puppy on it!*
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HAHAHA!!! *uses a rocket launcher to brake the shield*
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...meep! *Hides in a cardboard box~!*
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[a few needles penetrate the box]
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YAAH! AAH! GETITOUT! GETITOOOUT!!!
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[the box is launched over as I stand over you. A mere silhouette.]
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*I yank the needles out of my arm...and leg...and back... XD*
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Actually, it's time for a bowl of pears~ :3
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Injection first. *click click*
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*Starts turning pale... I throw my bowl of pears at you as a distraction and FLEE!!!*
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[you feel a tight whip wrap around you leg.]
C'mon. It wont hurt too bad. *drags you closer*
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*Head spins faster than the Exorcist demon*
No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No!
(FYI, I actually tried to conquer my fear by donating blood. And, no, I'm not doing it again. 
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(Selfish!)
[you feel barely a poke in your arm as you turn and see the needle being lift from your arm.]
There, no flu for you this year.
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Ehe...already had the flu, so a vaccine now...XD
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I really love the way you executed this piece. It was original, cute, and very, very funny! The only thing I have to say, however, is that Fluttershy went a little out of character at the end. In my mind, they would have ended up crying together, or some such. Despite that one minor flaw, the expressions are spot on! I really love the way you portray each character's emotions so perfectly in every comic window, it's one thing I just adore about your art. Anywho, to summarize this comic strip: It's funny, cute, and a definite upbringer from a hard day's night! Congratulations on the STELLAR work!
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Although I agree with the majority of your critique, I don't think Fluttershy's behaviour is out of character. She can assert herself if she knows it's for the good of her friends. It's just when she has no backup or reason for being assertive, then she fails awfully. I understand where you're coming from though
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I'm with you Pinkie, I know how you feel. I hate injections...
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I also don't like going to the dentist. It's the fear of having to be sedated and never waking up.
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All things considered... It could be a lot worse. I mean, it's mostly painless and very clean.
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I know how she feels. There's just something very uneasy about needles.
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I used to be a brave man like you...
Till I took a needle in the mouth.
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