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I tried >.<and I will try again >:[...
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Delayni [2013-05-16 05:54:02 +0000 UTC]
this really isn't that bad, i look forward to seeing a more full body shot from you sometime
i can't even do humans properly myself, but if i were to say anything, i'd mention the eyes. they look a little far apart, even from this perspective. maybe move the furthest one a bit closer to the nose and that'd at least be an improvement. i personally would also move the pupils closer together to make it look like she is focusing on something; given the initial distance of the eyes, the pupils look almost as if they're point two different directions a bit.
TaruHanako mentioned the size; I would agree and wouldn't mind if you made them smaller, but I think the larger eyes sort of give her more of that feline look that she still holds, even as a human. so that's up to you; they aren't TOO big to be a problem.
otherwise the overall conversion from the feline into humanoid is really well done; i lurv the ears and horns, and the skin tone is well picked. Not too dark, yet still grey and obvious enough that it came from Esava's near-black fur
good job
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Jade-Stardust [2013-05-15 22:40:45 +0000 UTC]
woo 8D
yeah keep trying! you can do it! i believe in you!
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amziss [2013-05-15 21:53:53 +0000 UTC]
no fail x3! Its awesome. I like how you draw the curls so.... right
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Domisea [2013-05-15 16:31:59 +0000 UTC]
It's not bad! The collarbones could be better and I'm confused about the chest and neck
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RedbuzzarddArt In reply to Domisea [2013-05-15 18:33:43 +0000 UTC]
yeah I paid no attention on the collarbone and chest , i was more focusing on working on the facial structure :3 but i will keep that in mind the next time.
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AngelOfChange [2013-05-15 15:51:58 +0000 UTC]
Keep on trying! But this is good for a first try!
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CitruShark [2013-05-15 14:58:02 +0000 UTC]
I think you did a very nice job on the facial structure!
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TheFailedDream [2013-05-15 14:23:34 +0000 UTC]
She looks great Slightly bit scary; very mystical
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Denece-the-sylcoe [2013-05-15 13:42:04 +0000 UTC]
Never give up!
That's ALWAYS how I feel when drawing humans. "Don't give up!" I say...but...my people never turn out they way I want them to.
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FlyingFrogFish [2013-05-15 12:52:28 +0000 UTC]
It's not that bad actually
you should make the eyes a bit smaller and nearer together ^^
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RedbuzzarddArt In reply to FlyingFrogFish [2013-05-15 18:32:43 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the feedback c: il practice more!
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FlyingFrogFish In reply to RedbuzzarddArt [2013-05-16 15:40:41 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to see it
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