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RedFalcon23 In reply to ChazzVC [2011-10-08 21:00:00 +0000 UTC]

looks awesome

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ChazzVC In reply to RedFalcon23 [2011-10-09 02:10:21 +0000 UTC]

glad you liked it, im halfway done with page ones penciling. some of the dialog will be altered/ added. like on the very first panel i had her think "what a day" as she was leaving work. Im also going to give each character a personality. Misao is going to be out going, saki is going to be shy and quiet (also why she gets bound so easy) and the third sister is going to be outgoing as well only not as bossy as misao.

Im also going to make the scene where her friend says "you must love your sisters" into a embarrassed "wha-wha-what are you talking about of course i do! the-the-they mean the world to me!" to kind of support the whole idea of a taboo sister relationship that isnt publically known

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RedFalcon23 In reply to ChazzVC [2011-10-09 02:24:30 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, sounds good.

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