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RedFalcon23 — Strange Visitor Extra 05
Published: 2019-08-15 21:45:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1629; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 9
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A sequel pic to the Throwback Thursday pic:
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and follow up to the Extra What If:
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At the time in story/comic whenever i finished the story i always uploaded some Extra pics, these contain What If scenarios of the story that was either not in the main story and were just ideas that were scrapped but here renewed again, mostly taking all ideas and concepts out of my notebook and showcase them.
So, on the Extra pics of Strange Visitor, What if.....what if Mana caught Haruka alongside Mio. On the story/comic Haruka saw Mio got caught by Mana, but what if Mana sensed that she was been followed and saw Haruka and thus in this extra would show Haruka also been caught alongside her new Space friend.
A close up of the KO'ed heroine. Haruka who was knocked out and carried by the shapeshifting Alien Mana, we see that even though Haruka looks peaceful in that pose and asleep, she is unaware that Mana proceeds to ensure that both heroines won't follow her and that would involved some rope and gags.
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Creature flies out, not going top speed this time since it's much closer than the middle of the ocean, landing in a nice secluded field.
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Creature lands: Alright, stay there, I'm going to use the technique on you so you have a feeling for what you should make your enemies feel.
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haruka nods: uhmm, sure.
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Creature gives her a glare, and she feels sheer mortal terror, like she is but a gnat before a god and she should run as fast as she can as quickly as she can. Granted the effect is lessoned by her being his daughter and her knowing he would never hurt her, but base instincts aren't very smart.
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haruka out of her DNA instincts tries to stay on her feet and while she does feel all of that, she constanty in her mind tells herself that that's her father and stares right at him
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Creature relaxes and the feeling fades: Did you get all that?
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haruka sits on the ground and sighs
haruka: pheww! that was extreme
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Creature walks over and kneels down, puting a hand on her shoulder: How do you feel?
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haruka: a little big shaken, not anymore though, but it felt like someone was hitting me inside me, if it wasnt for my...uhm, instincts i would collapse, huh?
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Creature: People are less affected, and you're my daughter so you know I would never hurt you. Those lessoned the effects.
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haruka: huh, thts't rue
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Creature: So, think you can do it?
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haruka: hmmm, i think so....im mostly chill, so....uhm.....
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Creature: Isn't there someone or something you want to beat?
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haruka thinks, creature knows how relax she is in terms of personality
haruka: hmmm, well i dont hate anyone. i should hate the people who experiment on me, but i dont really remember. hmm, maybe get angry if someone hurts the people i love....?
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Creature: What about the Viper Boss, she tried to hurt Yuna.
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haruka looks serious a bit
haruka: she did!?
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Creature: Yeah, and her Divas abducted Mai, didn't you know? She was saved, but they were going to hurt her too. *Referencing the story I wrote because it's convenient*
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seems like that's triggering her. Since Haruka only got memories since she was discovered by Kagura and taken care for in Mai and Yuna, it seems those three at the moment it what is triggering her. Creature, Diskette, Jane and Ayame also work, but she knows they are the safest
haruka: what!?
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Creature nods: And what about your mother? She's a powerful heroine and watching after Diskette, so I now they would do anything to get to her. Are you really going to say you don't hate the people that would hurt them?
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her relax personality and mellow attitude of a surfer girl is quite disappearing as haruka can only imagine: kagura, mai and yuna bound and gagged suspended on the air while creature protecting the rest.
he sees her turn around almost like going to fly. granted, she could display the thing he is teaching her, but haruka is not brilliant or mostly innocent as she doesnt thinking on showing her anger instincts on him
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Creature grabs her around the waist with his tail to keep her there: What are you going to do. If you want to save them, you have to make me let go, so how are you going to do it?
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haruka: huh!? but your not....
haruka tries to take it off
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Creature: You gonna have to get me to let go, you're gonna have to let out all the anger and your drive to dave them onto me or you'll never be able to protect them!
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haruka: but your my dad.....why would i bee angered at you!?
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Creature: Because I'm stopping you.
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haruka's cool attitude is fading, almost like she is turning into another person
haruka: ugh!! dad, quit it!! no!!
haruka only thinks at kagura, mai and yuna in the position she is thinking
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Creature keeps holding her, wanting to see her snap.
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he begins to see an odd transformation, almost like from 5 to 8 monsters are fusing on her body. human, arachnid, wolf, vampire, ruselka, golem, gargoyle and demon are showing as well one of her eyes turning into the mysterious demon eye
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Creature: Well that's unexpected... Haruka, I need you to listen to me. Yuna, Mai, and your mother are fine, they're not in danger. I was just trying to get you to focus your drive to fight towards me. Clearly it has gone too far, and I'm sorry.
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haruka is not quite listening to much as she is trying to control herself till he feels the instinct he is teaching her. he feels a strong aura, a predator aura, while is is strong and menacing, is not as powerful as his, though her aura is giving a wide radius of aura, if someone is nearby them they could passed out or be afraid.
haruka is growling as he sees one or 2 monster parts going back to her body
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Creature endures well enough, and he pulls her in an hugs her, stroking her head and shushing her: It's okay, everyone's fine.
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haruka is breathing heavily a bit, trying to control her DNA powers, slowly getting all of them back inside her. he can still feel her aura, though the wide radius slowly closes. her eye still shows the devil eye
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Creature: Haruka, how do you feel?
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haruka: angry, dad. we must save mom, and yuna and mai and what about diskette and...
she didn't heard him saying they are ok as the predator instinct wide area is now smaller
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Creature: None of them are in danger. I just said those things to get you mad so you would try to use what I was teaching you, they're fine. Everyone is fine.
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haruka: did....did i screw up?
she still shows it, with the eye still not changed
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Creature: No, this is my fault.
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haruka: nahh dad, your cool. your trying to teach me
she smiles
haruka: let me try again
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Creature: No, that's enough for today. *He looks at her eye*
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haruka: huh? but, i can control it this time, i swear and i can bet i can
haruka still has it, it does look intimidating been the devil eye
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Creature: I'm more concerned about how you have yet to dismiss this new Devil Eye. *He makes a highly reflectivve wing for her to see*
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haruka: whoa!!! that looks gnarly....uhm
she shakes her head as it turns back to her blue colored eye
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Creature: Since when did you have access to a Devil Eye?
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haruka shrugs: don't know, dad.
kagura might know as she was the one who found her
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Creature: Come on, let's go home.
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haruka: but dad, i wanna try it. i promise, i have it under control
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Creature: That's not what I'm-- *As he's about to explain he sprout the reflective wings again to block a radiant beam from the sky*
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haruka: whoa! what the...!?
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