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RedFalcon23 — Strange Visitor Extra 05
Published: 2019-08-15 21:45:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1631; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 9
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A sequel pic to the Throwback Thursday pic:
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and follow up to the Extra What If:
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At the time in story/comic whenever i finished the story i always uploaded some Extra pics, these contain What If scenarios of the story that was either not in the main story and were just ideas that were scrapped but here renewed again, mostly taking all ideas and concepts out of my notebook and showcase them.
So, on the Extra pics of Strange Visitor, What if.....what if Mana caught Haruka alongside Mio. On the story/comic Haruka saw Mio got caught by Mana, but what if Mana sensed that she was been followed and saw Haruka and thus in this extra would show Haruka also been caught alongside her new Space friend.
A close up of the KO'ed heroine. Haruka who was knocked out and carried by the shapeshifting Alien Mana, we see that even though Haruka looks peaceful in that pose and asleep, she is unaware that Mana proceeds to ensure that both heroines won't follow her and that would involved some rope and gags.
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Creature: Shit, nataS sensed you using the eye... *Creature retracts the wings, and the tw are staring down nataS and a contingent of his nuns*
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haruka looks at them as she gets serious: sorry, dad.
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Creature: No, this one's on me. *She can feel him becoming more monstrous, though for him he doesn't change his form.*
nataS: Poor creature, come with us so we may save you from this beast.
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haruka: uhmm, dude, rude. im also a beast and he is my awesome dad
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nataS: You will see the truth soon. *He pulls out a glowing blade*
Creature: The nuns are no joke, don't get in over your head.
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haruka: ok, dad. i will not hold back
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Creature yells and rushes nataS, the two getting into a brawl in the nearby trees while the group of about 5 nuns slowly approach Haruka.
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haruka stands in boxing position as her bat wings on her head wiggle a bit
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The 5 quickly teleport to surround her and shoot out balls of light, closing in on her slowly.
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haruka's bat wings on her head were used as a powerful radar as she transformed her body into a chameleon, with a dark tail that swings the balls of light back at them.
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As she strike the balls they stick to her, and they aren't coming off.
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haruka spits acid to take them off as she flies off, avoiding to be surrounded
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The acid doesn't affect them due to them being a form of energy, and as she takes off they glow brighter and she's struck with a beam from above.
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haruka begins to curl her body in fetal position as she begins to spin faster and faster, concentrating the light energy with her own, sending herself down to make a poweful shockwave on them, getting the energy off her body using her skin changing DNA
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When the shockwave detonates the orbs dissipate and the beam follows, but when she stops one of the nuns is floating there and grabs her by the neck tight.
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haruka using her DNA powers uses it to turn her head to face the nun as she spits acid and her powerful dragon fire attack
haruka: dragon breath!!
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The nun squeezes her neck hard to try and stop her but she is driven back, just in time for the other for to come up from behind and grab Haruka's limbs, beginning to pull her to the ground as she feels them trying to drain her of her will to fight.
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haruka makes her body way to snake like as she jumps off from her grasp, pulling that nun to the nun who is burning from the acid. haruka backs up a bit
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As Haruka backs up she notices the nun she had breathed fire on is missing, and then she feels a mask like the nuns are wearing (completely blank and a marble white) and it latches onto her face, as she tries o rip it off it stays stuck.
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haruka jumps and spins as she begins to spit acid all over the area where the nuns are, as she grows wings
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As she does she finds herself growing weaker, losing energy, she begins to land as she hears a soft voice in the back of her head: That's not nice, why don't you stop?
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haruka shakes it off as she puts more of her DNA powers to get energy, fighting over losing it.
haruka: huh? who....
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As she tries she begins to grow limp.
Soft Voice: Stop, it is better to be docile and obey. *suddenly her vision goes from dark to blindingly bright*
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haruka growls as she screams
haruka: your not in control of me!!
she struggles using all the DNA monsters she could find to fight everything back
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The more she tries to fight physically, the weaker her physical body becomes until she can't move at all.
Soft Voice: No, you must be cleansed. Look into the light. *Despite her best efforts Haruka still sees the light, and a figure standing in it, she feels drawn to him*
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haruka: NO!!! You won't take me!!
her growl turns even louder, hurting most of the nuns hearing capabilities.
haruka: im not going!!!
as she tries to turn, in the air she slowly begins to turn into stone, as a defense mechanism
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Soft Voice: Enough. *She feels her powers shutting down, her body no longer in her control* Let go, allow yourself to be cleansed. *The figure in the light comes closer to her, and she can't move, but it doesn't make sense that she can see anything with this mask locked on her face. There's a trick going on in her head.*
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As he or she tries to shut her powers off, haruka becomes unstable as forms of gas and light began to pour out all over her body, making her even more dangerous to anyone of proximity. The gas and light is not to take lightly as the nuns can feel agony, sense of taking their own lives or even straight out explode. Haruka is not doing any of this, but her dna is going way more out of control from the shut down, slowly her body turning unrecognizable. This sign makes a certain world eater smile
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As this happens the mask puts a field around her to contain the damage and keep her from getting away as it tried to warp her mind, getting her closer to the figure so it can control her, something she can resist only if she can focus and assert her power over herself like Creature was trying to teach her.
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While the mask does its thing, it begins to break as not only haruka is on a lock out predator mode thanks to creature, they are unable to control her fully not only with haruka auto focus of power but her now unstable dna overload. Each seconds it takes to be with haruka mind or even body is causing that person to get more damage on its body almost like she is beyond radioactive
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*The entity that is in her mind and not real grabs her head in her mind as a sort of metaphysical representation of herself.*
Soft Voice: Submit to the cleansing.
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haruka's predator instinct is going even wilder as the soft voice's metaphysical aura is getting aura's wild intimidation and unstable aura, even though it is not physical the soft voice is been getting lots of damage because of two things:
1- haruka's now unstable and complete override of her entire dna mutations going all on high level that not even those powerful enough can stay to long or able to heal rapidly from it
2- the soft voice can feel that someone has put a magical spell on haruka's head, this magic belongs to saori and is unbreakable as that is the second reason why the soft voice is been damaged.
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The mask then shatters, and the voice disappears.
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haruka's predator instinct is going up to 11 at this point, though sadly the magic can hold a bit. almost the entire place is unstable for anyone in the perimeter
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The nuns have retreated, but Creature is rushing in to her, apparently nataS has left at this development.
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haruka's whole unstable DNA has cause some serious damage not only to the nuns, some did not escaped and nataS might have suffered some scars here and there all while feeling haruka's predator instinct on his back
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Creature closes in on her location, pushing through the pain and force healing himself to try and get close to her.
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he sees haruka's essence, which is basically like a red and blue line of her body, but she doesn't have any recognizable form, not even her own
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Creature gets closer: Haruka, can you hear me!
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he hears thousands of voices all belong to haruka, but each sound like she is in a monster form
haruka: dad....? dad.....?
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Creature gets closer: I'm right here, focus on the sound of my voice!
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all can he hear is her voice as she is unstable, her body is just air
haruka: dad.....i can't.....control it.....i....dont wanna....hurt you....!
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Creature: You can control it, and you won't hurt me! Just focus! It's your power, so you control it!
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haruka: dad......no.....i...i dont want to explode......!
haruka hearing his father's, for her, her now real father in her heart, gets to focus and to motivate herself to do one last effort: her whole body is now turning into something solid, but not a recognizable figure, instead her body turns into mineral, 5 to 8 boulder size minerals now with no recgonition that she is a human or any living thing. the 8 boulders fall
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Creature rushes over: HARUKA!
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on the ground he only sees 8 boulders on the ground. he feels her predator instinct fading as well the intense raditation she was leaving
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Creature picks the boulders up with ease: Come on, give me a sign...
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is really hard to distinguish which boulder is what from haruka, her head, her legs, her torso, is really really weird. he does feel almost a pulse from her
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Creature takes off, hoping Medic can help make heads and tails of her in this form. And if anyone tries to stop him they better watch out for some of that good old fashioned fatherly wrath.
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he does sense that haruka is there
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