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Ladies and Gentlemen, Please welcome...The Meanie Three! The three mean girls of Ray Gun's world.---------
Bella Chandler - She is the Queen Bee and the ring leader of The Meanie Three. They might think that she's the prefect mixture of charisma, force, wealth, privileges, beauty, will, and manipulation, Eventually there's something more inside her that she never really wanted to share. Bella Chandler also serves as Ray Gun's arch-nemesis. She always constantly bullying her with how she's friendless and how she made friends that aren't really there (thus calling her crazy).
Claire Marinift - Bella's best friend and the second-in-command of the Meanie Three. These two have been together ever since they were little. She always acts like a queen (how she wears the magenta cape is that she would one day be the Queen Bee like her friend Bella one day). She's very persnickety, loud-mouthed, and is just controlling. Her father's a huge Oil Baron.
Danielle DeRonstar - The Wannabe and Bella's third-in-command of the Meanie Three. Even if she's friends with Bella and Claire, she has a bit of Mixed feelings for them, She just wants to stay out of trouble with them. She's very wimpy, cowardly, but within her is a sweet side and a talent waiting to be revealed.
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About them, Claire Marinift was actually intended to be the mean girl, while as for Bella and Danielle, these girls might have something well hidden within them that they really don't want to share. So to make more sense, Bella and Danielle are both acting like mean girls but as for Claire Marinift, she's intended to be the Mean girl.
Also about the artwork here, I had to make the marks because it can be hard to see without them. I made a few of them. how stupid of me.
Well, I hope that you can meet them in Ray Gun's first story and I also got plans for them when they are in Ray Gun's imagination.
Enjoy. Go ahead and critique if you like.
Phineas and Ferb (c) Dan Povenmire & Jeff 'Swampy' Marsh & Disney
Bella Chandler, Claire Marinift, Danielle DeRonstar (c)
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Comments: 79
Okay, a critique just for ya e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Okay, here it goes.
Vision - Well...
Joey, the drawings itself are pretty good, but what ruins it are the coloring and the random inking in only some spots.
A little tip: You have to choose or inking, or only sketching. Inking the drawing before the coloring also it's a thing I'm recommending.
About the characters: Claire's too much alike Marie, you should make some changes on her (unless you're trying to make a 'bad version' of Marie)
The other two, Bella and Danielle are very well designed (my fave is Danielle) and very well draw.
So, 3.5 stars e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Originality -
Again, another pretty original artwork, I say.
The only point that you really sinned on it was Claire's face appearence. It's too much alike Marie, and it isn't good for a totally different character.
The other two Meanies and Clarie's clothes are original and cool, as always.
Technique -
I have the same points I had to say in "Vision".
The drawing's good, but you need to choose between inking and coloring, or just sketching it, and then, coloring.
The random inked stops makes the art look crappy, when it actually isn't.
So, 2.5 stars
Impact - About impact, it's cool: The character poses are pretty good and their story is good as well. You're improving really fast, Joey. I like it!
The only thing I PERSONALLY don't like it's Claire's chin detail. It looks... Weird. But it's just me, don't take this serious.
Overal: Good art. Needs a bit of improving, but it's awesome and original as always;
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Well, this was my critique, and hope you like it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Sayonara, and... Yeah, bye e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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About Claire, Yeah I might thinking about revamping her design more.
thanks for the critique. care to look at the Ray Gun Flynn picture?
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Sure
Ehmm... Which one 
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OOoh, okay.
I'll give a critique about that too
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Which one do you think is closest to Marie? I mean just as crazy?
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Claire. but I rebooted her look.
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Danielle reminds me of people who are only with the bullies so that they dont get bullied, like Babs Seed from My Little Pony
Cool characters
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And Bella has something that she doesn't want to share.
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That will be revealed later on.
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ohh .. very nice drawing ..
they look so KICK ASS ...
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yr welcome 
nice i con BTW
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One of them Is the ultimate bitch.
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Wow! The brats... so where did you get this idea and who were they based off of? Just wondering...
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I perhaps might have thought Bella Chandler would in some way be like Mitt Romney. But I don't know... Any difference between Bella and Mitt?
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Okay then... Good enough.
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Well, I should draw one of these three soon...
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sure give Bella a chance.
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And oh yeah, this should give me an idea... About this character... I'll try Chingbee as one of my own characters. Any suggestions?
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I said I was asking if there's any advice you'd like to give about making my own characters...
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Use your own imagination and be creative, if stuck, find inspiration.
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Thanks very much, Joey...
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You're very much welcome...
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With Claire intended to be the meanest of them all. Bella and Danielle are acting mean but they're hiding something.
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Nothing is complete without the usual gang of misfit missies.
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And Ray Gun's friends are the Misfit Missies. Like their personalities?
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Yeah, they have that classic valley girl vibe there. And I was referring to these girls. Do they have crushes on any boys?
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Well You'll might find that out later on.
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