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I just found the name and some sketches of my comic "A Sunny Day" so I decided to make a step by step picThis is the first page of the comic. Well, we always spend a lot of time and effort on the first pages, right? I had to scan every step of the first 3 pages. They took me much more time than other pages of the comic x__x
1) First step: I finished the whole 27-page name before drawing any single page. For any one who is not familiar with the word "name", it's the rough draft which the finished manga is based off of Yes, they're very simple and messy
2) Second step: I drew a detailed sketch for the first page based on the name.
3) Third step: I lined the sketch with a pigment pen. It looks much cleaner now but, like usually, not as good as the sketch.
4) Fourth step: After inking (painting black) some part of the lineart. I tried to add screentone with photoshop but failed epically LOL. Well, I had thought a lot before throwing this page into recycle bin 'cuz it had took me a lot of time anyway. But my sister said that she couldn't accept this kind of comic page so I threw it away =="
5) Fifth step: Well, on the inked lineart, I gave it more black part. Finally, it turned out a black and white comic page. A bit too monotonous but I didn't know how to add screentone so I left it like that..
6) Sixth step (Really? lol): After finishing all 27 pages, I made the cover. I know that if I had made the cover first, I would have been unable to finish the comic. Don't ask me why, that's my style hahaha
I only had trouble with step 4 in the first 3 pages 'cuz I decided not to use screentone in the rest of the comic. Once bitten, twice shy
Ah, here is the comic if you're ever interested >> [link] ^^
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Comments: 49
diichan [2012-05-27 22:00:00 +0000 UTC]
I need to read this comic of yours, Red! I love love seeing the making of a project like this, I can tell a lot of time went into it and it's gorgeous. I love the different kinds of trees you have and your character acting is great, too! The panels and staging are original and lovely!
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redsama In reply to diichan [2012-05-28 10:13:02 +0000 UTC]
It's great to read this comment from you, my friend! I will post more comics when I have time, for sure!
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redsama In reply to flowerpower138 [2012-05-13 16:03:47 +0000 UTC]
It takes time for sure. But I believe that you can do it if you have enough patience
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flowerpower138 In reply to redsama [2012-05-13 16:18:46 +0000 UTC]
okey~ but then i need five cups of coffie(i can get pretty~ lazy XP)
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maxprodanov [2012-05-12 16:08:36 +0000 UTC]
The shadows on the final picture are much better than the "failed one". Still, I think the screentone used on the sweater looks really good.
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redsama In reply to maxprodanov [2012-05-13 12:01:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you a lot for the nice words!!
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redsama In reply to fixinman [2012-05-08 09:43:53 +0000 UTC]
I haven't master how to use screentone so it's a fail to me
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fixinman In reply to redsama [2012-05-08 14:36:45 +0000 UTC]
Actually you are very good at it. By the way that is a great series.
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weewill [2012-03-13 11:27:20 +0000 UTC]
cho cái sceentone áo nó như ở cái 4 thì đẹp đấy anh sợ trò phác rồi vẽ của mày rồi : ))
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redsama In reply to weewill [2012-03-13 16:15:19 +0000 UTC]
Uh tao cũng định thế nhưng mà nếu screentone áo thì phải làm cả background nữa, nếu ko bị lạc lõng, kì cục lắm
Chả sợ à, nghĩ lại a còn sợ, kiểu ko hiểu sao mình lại chăm được thế ấy : ))
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redsama In reply to AnArtisticWorld [2012-03-12 15:26:36 +0000 UTC]
I don't have any magic But if I did, I would sure give you some lol
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Kp-Cx [2012-03-11 05:15:32 +0000 UTC]
the final is definaly the best! hard to believe it started from so little detail^ ^
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redsama In reply to Kp-Cx [2012-03-11 15:11:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Anyway I will try to use screentone more properly in my next comics xD
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Niels133 [2012-03-11 04:47:03 +0000 UTC]
lấy cái 4 chồng lên cái 5 được đấy nhỉ kiểu số 4 thì thừa grey tone số 5 thì thiếu
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redsama In reply to Niels133 [2012-03-11 15:21:47 +0000 UTC]
Thử rồi, trông được phết mới sợ = )) Nhưng dù sao dùng screentone kiểu này vẫn là kiểu trẻ con tô màu, phải tìm hiểu và học thêm đã
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Niels133 In reply to redsama [2012-03-14 09:31:39 +0000 UTC]
cố lên hê hê, giàu chớ quên bạn
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redsama In reply to Niels133 [2012-03-11 15:04:19 +0000 UTC]
Ơ, ý hay thế! Ko nghĩ ra đấy = )) Được rồi, để bao h a thử
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PenumbraChey [2012-03-11 02:43:49 +0000 UTC]
I always love seeing the way people build their work up step-by-step.
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redsama In reply to PenumbraChey [2012-03-11 15:03:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Cheryl! Seeing the way people build their work can tell a lot about them and their style. I like doing it too
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Hinata6Uchiha [2012-03-10 16:51:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is really good. I like looking at your steps and the comic seems interesting! I'm going to read it XD
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kuradoll [2012-03-10 16:43:03 +0000 UTC]
I actually like the screentoned one as well has the reinked on, it reminds me of a older comic feel with the screentone ^^
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redsama In reply to kuradoll [2012-03-11 15:01:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh, thanks for your opinion, Kurakay! I will practice using screentone to make better comic in the future ^^
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kuradoll In reply to redsama [2012-03-11 17:46:15 +0000 UTC]
your welcome, thank you for making sure beautiful art !
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Kuroeno [2012-03-10 13:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Uwaaa this is awesome OTL
Pigment pens... are expensive?
did you use the same on the re-inking part?[on the black parts, i mean]
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redsama In reply to Kuroeno [2012-03-11 14:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Kurohana! xD
Pigment pens or pigment liners are not expensive I think. I usually use Uni (~0.8$) and Staedler (~1.4S). You can see some photos of them here >> [link] [link] [link] I'm not sure about their prices in other countries but I think they are not too expensive anyway
And yes, I used the same liners on the re-inking part. I usually use 0.05 for do linearts and 0.8 for inking (paint black) ^^
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Kuroeno In reply to redsama [2012-03-12 21:28:54 +0000 UTC]
OOOOhhhhh Thank you so much!!
So the uni is a pigment pen [i never noticed
or i probably did but i just forgot *A*]
The price increased yet again OTL
Before, it cost me P57[around $1.33]
to P65 [$1.52]. Damn economy.
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redsama In reply to Kuroeno [2012-03-13 17:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh yes, the prices for those pen increase like everyday I have to pay more and more each time I go to buy a new one
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Kuroeno In reply to redsama [2012-03-13 21:28:46 +0000 UTC]
really? oooh so it's not just i here. I wonder why *A*
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redsama In reply to Kuroeno [2012-03-14 11:45:58 +0000 UTC]
Well, whenever I ask why the prices keep rising, the art material shop owners tell me it's because the import tax was raised (Uni is Japanese and Staedler is German) and so was the USD. No matter whether you believe or not, you have to pay at those prices without any complaint
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Kuroeno In reply to redsama [2012-03-14 21:26:22 +0000 UTC]
oooohhh I see, I see.
Then, i guess there's nothing i can do about it OTL.
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