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Redundantthoughts — Turn the Phase - Chapter 2 Juncture Part 2
Published: 2014-04-11 05:03:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 906; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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"Hearing Simon gasp, L. T. turned and followed his mentor's gaze towards the sun dipping beneath the distant horizon. The young man's heart pounded in his chest as his mind struggled to comprehend what his eyes were seeing. He saw what, he knew, could only be a manifestation of spirit. But Simon must have thought he was beholding an angel."
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Chapter 2 Part 2/2 for this chapter! This one was more of a challenge, possibly will fix some stuff if I have time.
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I like the fact that she seems to be "not all there"... both in her vaporous form and her ambiguous, glassy-eyed expression. It really makes you think our two boys must be questioning what they are seeing, and their own sanity. I am also glad you stepped away from an "angelic" look, it could be angel or demon or something altogether different.
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Thank you very much! 
Mmhm I didn't want it to seem to cliche or too obvious. I am glad it comes through is a good way! It was a bit of a struggle!
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I think you've once again succeeded in diverging just enough from my original script to render a piece which conveys the essence of the scene. The text above was originally from the point of view of Simon and LT sitting in the cab of their machine, but changing it around I think it suits the excellent artwork you've tendered just fine. I think it complements the image quite fine in addition to capturing the mood and feel of the moment. Another successful collaboration indeed. Enjoyed working with you and look forward to doing so again soon. Real soon.
MJE
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I am glad I could make it work for both of us even though it is a bit different than what you originally wrote! It was a bit of a challenge but really fun and I am pretty satisfied with how it turned out. Thanks for working with me and yes I am really excited for the next one!
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