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Redwingsparrow In reply to Xein000 [2017-10-20 08:42:28 +0000 UTC]

He is talking to Starling. And I just realized that this panel is wrong, will have to fix it. :/

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Xein000 In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 11:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Glad to see it fixed  thank you.

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Redwingsparrow In reply to Shade-the-AshClad [2017-10-20 08:40:45 +0000 UTC]

He is talking to Starling who is standing on his other side when he passes her. 

Also when I finished the last panel I realized that the reaction of Starling should be the last thing you see, so I edited it. But it still makes sense if you look at Coral's other side, it all depends on the perspective and from which angle you are looking (hope that makes sense) . :3

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Shade-the-AshClad In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 08:48:34 +0000 UTC]

     So then, the whole panel is intentionally mirrored.  Why?

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Redwingsparrow In reply to Shade-the-AshClad [2017-10-20 08:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I just realized I'm wrong. I'm so very sorry, this make no sense what so ever. Will have to fix that.  

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Shade-the-AshClad In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 09:01:45 +0000 UTC]

     It's alright.  There are a lot of details to keep track of when making a comic.  Based on the character positions in this page and the previous, I think you could pretty much just flip the panel on a vertical axis.

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Redwingsparrow In reply to Shade-the-AshClad [2017-10-20 09:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for understanding. I'll just fix the eyes, because I want Starlings expression to be the last thing you see. And fixing the eyes won't be that difficult.

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Shade-the-AshClad In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 09:23:06 +0000 UTC]

     I don't know how others view comics but unless there are multiple dialog bubbles or other attention-drawing details, I usually view an individual panel in its entirety rather than from left to right.  If there is multiple dialog (or in this case written words to accentuate an action i.e. "NOD"), I usually view them from the top to bottom (as is the typical flow of written parts of comics along with left-to-right).  Personally, I think it would make more sense if you move the dialog bubble to the top of the panel.  Then the flow moves downward to the "NOD NOD NOD".  Also, flipping the panel makes more sense with the apparent position of the characters as seen in this page and the previous.  That said, you are the author/illustrator, not me, and you have a better understanding of what works for your comic.

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Redwingsparrow In reply to Shade-the-AshClad [2017-10-20 09:50:25 +0000 UTC]

I guess you have a point, and I have been thinking about it for a while now. Maybe I'll just return it to it's original state and move the dialog bubble. I'll fix it and then show you again. :3

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Shade-the-AshClad In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 09:55:19 +0000 UTC]

     Okay.  I await the edit. 

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Redwingsparrow In reply to Shade-the-AshClad [2017-10-20 10:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Okey, I've edited it, so what do you think now? :3

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Shade-the-AshClad In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 10:26:28 +0000 UTC]

     Excellent.  It flows so nicely now.  If you flip back and forth between pg.49 and pg.50, you can clearly see where all the characters are and where they are going.  My attention definitely settles on Starling.  Good job.  

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Redwingsparrow In reply to Shade-the-AshClad [2017-10-20 10:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the help.  

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Shade-the-AshClad In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 10:43:16 +0000 UTC]

     You're welcome.

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Redwingsparrow In reply to Redwingsparrow [2017-10-20 08:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I just realized I'm wrong. I'm so very sorry, this make no sense what so ever. Will have to fix that.  

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