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This is a little break with the Weakness story.R&J will be a very short and quick story that came to my mind yesterday night. Even when i will work with some characters of the LoK, my focus with this short story is render emotions. As you can see, first page has not dialogues.
I really appreciate if you can help me, telling me:
- Can you understand the secuences?
- Can you feel the emotions of characters?
- Can you understand where the actions are performed?
Very soon, i will tell you what is the meaning of the name of this doujinshi and in which story is based.
Thanks in advance!!! ^^
Page 1: You are here ^^
Page 2: [link]
Raziel, Kain and Legacy of Kain Universe (C) Crystal Dinamics
Story and art made by Reenave
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Comments: 13
Cast-Into-The-Abyss [2011-01-31 11:54:24 +0000 UTC]
The meaning so far is very clear as is the action portrayed. Raziel = Love
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Reenave In reply to Cast-Into-The-Abyss [2011-03-11 04:36:58 +0000 UTC]
hahahaha! Savage love!!!
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Venneta [2011-01-16 19:08:39 +0000 UTC]
The sequences .. is it left to right?
The emotion can be felt easily the settings are great too! Nice page~
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Reenave In reply to Venneta [2011-01-16 19:17:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!
Yes, the sequences are in the order left to right, until now i have not experimented doing it in Japanese order of reading
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NeonCalavera [2011-01-09 12:44:27 +0000 UTC]
I guess i'm gonna adore this doujin well for answering to you:
Yes the sequences are very neat and easy to read
Sure i can feel the emotions, you're improving in better everyday with facial expression
You also have a very clean style and you make your characters move very nicely.
So go for it sweetie!
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Reenave In reply to NeonCalavera [2011-01-10 05:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much my friend!! I really appreciate your commments! Iยดm trying to improve in every new page i draw and will appreciate all the support that can give me my watchers about things i need to improve!!
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AiNoHoritsu [2011-01-08 15:27:05 +0000 UTC]
i love the background and that guy (in the 4th panel) look really cool! (cat ears?)
is this based on romeo and Juliet? because that's all i can think of....
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Reenave In reply to AiNoHoritsu [2011-03-11 04:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!! And you are right! It was inspired by the anime Romeo and Juliet XD
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Reenave In reply to mushroomisland [2011-01-07 00:50:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!!
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Reenave In reply to Shigunisu [2011-01-07 00:50:26 +0000 UTC]
Bueno, Raziel se puede cenar al que se le ponga al frente...basta con que tenga la mala suerte el pobre de encontrarlo con hambre LOL
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