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Published: 2006-09-17 08:35:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 3541; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 13
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a re-do of an old pic of mine .... I dont realy have a story for this pic so feel free to make one up ^_^Related content
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The last witch:
Super science had completely devastated the world. Humanity's only hope lies in magic but the last witch had died centuries ago... or had she....?
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realy?.... hmm I guess it dose in a way
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and now its shot back up AGAIN! *Pouts* being sick sucks..
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aww im sorry...I dont realy get sick the most i ever get is a stuffy nose...but one time a few months ago I was realy sick like realy sick I couldnt keep anything down that I ate...I think I had food poisening
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ohh im sorry and dont worry it went back down again
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well thats good ^_^ glad to hear your feeling better
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i am feeling MUCH better and now i can write MORE stories for you!
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allright! well do you want it here or do you want me to send it in notes?
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you can sene it to me in notes that way its easier for me to read...you should post these storys on your page im sure other people would like to hear them too ^_^
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aw no prob your a realy good writer ^_^
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LOL its nothing to be embarased about you realy are a good writer ^_^
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quite really your the first person to say that! *Huggles* You've given me insparation...and now once i can get over this 104.8 fever i'll write some more
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oh you have a fever im sorry about that...eat lots of soup itl make you feel better ^_^
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well sense last night my fever dropped from 104.8 to 98.3
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sure if you want I realy like reading it ^_^
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can i can i make a story on this pleeesseee? i really have got an idea for this
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sure ^_^ cant wait to see wht youve come up with ^_^
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well you wouledent mind if i base it from an anime i've seen would you? It would just be the world from the anime not the events.
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there is the story tell me if you want it abridged
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~please...help me...pain..hurt....help me...~ Raptor sat up in his bed and sighed...that voice had been taunting him for the past three days....whoever it was..either enjoyed driveing him mad...or was trying to send him a message....
Raptor sat up and swung his legs over the metal bed and ran his hand through his shagy semi- spiky red hair and stood up..today was the day...
Raptor walked over to a mirror and looked at himself in his long green pajama's...he looked like something that crawled out from a sewer..not a highly trained assasin that was being paid to infiltrate the clawman's base..
Speaking of the claw man i best explain from the begining....the claw man was a person who had a dream...a dream that would unintentionaly destroy every liveing thing on the planet...though the clawman knew the possiblites of this..he still pursued his dream as if it was the last thing he had left in the world....and his name 'clawman' refer's to his right hand..that had been cut off 25 years before...and replaced with a bio-mechanical hand that was the shape of a hand with 5 long gold finger's that ended in razor sharp claws...
Raptor was in a orgnization that had been watching the claw man for some time now....and when the clawman had gotten another 'armor' they had decided that enough was enough and sent raptor in to find the armor and sabotage the base and escape in the armor..now an armor was basicly a huge machene that most of them were in the shape's of human's ((Imagene tranformer's but more human shaped)) The avrage armor stood about 200 two 300 feet high....and either came with gun emplacements or swords...
Raptor changed out of his pajama's and changed into his clothes...that held a few things he needed..some c-4 exploseives and a few hacking chipsets and of couse some diet coke and mentos...witch made a for a good distraction when needed.
He walked out into the corridor and looked both ways...he checked his watch and smiled..it was 6:30 so not many pepole would be up at this hour except for a backbone security crew witch only consisted of about mabey 50 men..and considering this HUGE base the liklyness of somone stopping him was 10 to 1.
Raptor walked down the corridors while he was deep in thought..who was that person..the..girl? That girl who kept calling to him while he was asleep...whoever it was she sounded like she was in agony...Raptor shook his head and concentrated..first thing he'd need to find was the controll room....
And after a few minuets of mindless roaming around he found it.....Raptor walked in and almost gasped...the clawman himself was sitting at the chair of the controll pannel.."Ah raptor!" The clawman said as he smiled with his elderly face...the claw man looked like he was sixty years old and yet still very kind and gentle...raptor wanted to pull out his pistol and end his miserable life now..how many pepole had been salughterd because of his 'dream'!?
But raptor kept a straight face and smiled "Good to see you sir." The claw man smiled and turned back to the security pannel
"What are you doing up at this hour?" He asked keeping his kind tone
Raptor sighed "I-i...i think you might be in danger sir."
The claw man turned to him in surprise "Danger? What sort of danger?"
Raptor had allways been a quick thinker and now wasent an exception "The security here is...well less than to be desired..if you ask me an assasin could waltz right in and sabotage the base!"
The clawman looked in mild curiousity..his smile still not leaving his face. "Well do you think you can help fix it?"
Raptor smiled...the clawman had taken the bait. "Sure i can after all you did hire me to protect you." Raptor put a hand on the clawman's shoulder "Ya know..you look tired i think you should get some rest...afer all you'r going to need all your strength for that speach this afternoon."
The clawman sighed "I sopose i am a little tired..allright raptor you win." The claw man stood up and put his clawed golden hand on raptor's shoulder "If anything happens to the system just press that red buttion and it'll reset the system..." The claw man walked out and smiled "Have fun." He said before leaving and shutting the sound proof door behind him.
Raptor sighed and looked at the controll pannel...at the end of it there was a BIG red butttion...He pushed the keyboard off the desk and said "Dont need this anymore.." Raptor pulled out his gun and aimed at the red buttion "Dont need THIS anymore." He said THIS as he squeezed off a shot that blew the red buttion into a shower of sparks...
Raptor sat down at the keyboard and craked his knuckles..."Time to get 'crackin" He said as he accesed the hollow pad and begain rerouteing power from system's like 'light' and 'air conditioning' to the subsystem called 'zack'..witch to raptor's understanding was the armor that he needed to use...raptor stopped his hacking when he noticed a glowing power rute on the hollo projector....it was connected to the labs..and strangley he couldent dissconect the power from it..it was as if it was rooted in....
Raptor shook his head...he'd probably check it out on his way out...HE stood up and pressed the green buttion and rerouted power to the armor and the lights went out and the air suddenly got stuffy...Raptor put on his infa-red goggles and his eyes tried to adjust to the new veiw....
Raptor ran down the halls and avoided the panicing pepole..who seemed to have no intent but to run around screaming...by raptor's calculations it'd be at least five minuets before they'd figure out that it was raptor who had caused this...
Raptor ran past a corner and stopped dead in his tracks as a line of security gauirds with there rifle's aimed at him....Raptor counted how many there were...12 gaurds all pointing there guns at him..way to many bullets would come to dodge...and they'd shoot him before he'd have time to unhook a grenade....
Ben slowly reached into his pocket and pulled out his bottle of diet coke as an idea formed in his head.
"DONT MOVE!" The security gaurd yelled at him
"Im just thirsty..." Raptor said as he pulled out the diet coke and showed them so they knew it wasent a bomb or anything..then he slowly pulled out his pack of mentos and held it out "Any taker's?...no fine then more for me." Raptor put for mentos in his mouth and opened his bottle of diet coke..and put it two his lips and spit the four mint's inside the bottle...He quickly put the lid on and threw it to one of the security gaurds...who stupidly dropped his gun to catch it...ben ran back to the corner for cover as he heard the make-shift-bomb explode...douseing every gaurd in a sticky minty liquid that used to be diet coke.
Raptor ran down the hall and jumped over the complaining security gaurds and ran into the first open door...that he instantly shut and bolted and sealed the best he could and turned around and nearly ran into a large black sign that read 'labritory' Raptor sighed and smiled a little.from here it was a straight shot to the docking staion where they kept the armor... raptor walked along the hallway slowly takeing in the sights around him...there were tubes the size of a giant being suspended on the walls..
some tube's were large enough to fit a whale....most of them were empty..but a few of them had thing's like unrecognizable animals or glop in them...the last tube on the wall held...a small woman? Raptor ran up to the tube..he recognized this girl..yes! She had to be the one who called him in his dreams...the one who sounded in pain..no wonder considering the tube's that were connected to her body at several places as she floated..completly naked in the blue liquid...Raptor tapped on the glass...foolish enough to think that it would wake her up...but he nearly jumped back in surprise as she opened her eyes and looked directly at raptor and spoke through his mind ~hello~.....
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Kyaa!!! that was so awesomness!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so cool I dont think anyones ever turned my pics into a stiry like that before I loved it^_^ I wanted to keep on going to know what would happen next......though one thing though like in the middle of the story you changed his name to ben for a little...or did you mean to write (then) ? anyways its awesmoe and I luved it ^_^
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woah! I've looked through your gallery like a 2390721 times and for some reason I've never like actually seen this picture but man I 
YOUR ART IS SOOO AWESOME I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE IT!
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Thanx ^_^....yeah this is one of my fav pics too....is photo shop fun I know some people who have it and they like it alot too ..paint shop sounds cool too ^_^
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That's Really Awsome! It's a very cool and creative idea!
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Wow that's cool. Did you use photoshop for the colouring? And is that suppose to be you in the tank lol?
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Thanx ....nah I didnt use photo I used paints the one thats installed on every computer cause im too poor to afford the good stuff...and no thats not me just some random char I drew ^_^
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Wow paint!? No way! O_o I seriously thought it was like photoshop...usually colouring comes out crappy with paint (well whenever I do it anyway). Interesting..
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nice.. i drew sumit along the same lines as this.. but mine had big DOOM like monsters in, huge warehouses full of em.. one escapes an the cantral point of the image is the escaped monster grasping at an angel gasping "help..me..", yea ok so it aint so similar but ther ya go.. i think this girl is part of a weapons research facility wer theyre trying to make a super weapon out of her
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This drawing turned out really good! I love the colouring/cel shading effects in this drawing.
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reminds me of the end ish kinda middle part of ultraviolet (if that made sense.)
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I wrote a story with a picture similar to this!So cool.
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Interesting. You could say it's a clone. Hence the other identical tubes. :3
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