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Published: 2006-02-27 15:18:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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Description [some days each new line is treasured ... some days revered ... and others ... well ... just strike an unharmonious chord]

here..because i just could not get the text quite as clear as i would like...although it's great printed ...

staring at the hands of time
facing myself in the mirror
- alone - complete -
i am humbled by nature
wearing childhood wings
we veer hurredly towards
this convergence
only to be halted sharply - dead
viewing now
the outward expression
of this passage
so incongruous ... so unlike
the spirit within
succumbing to reality
practicing acceptance
i warmly merge this disparity
of soul & skin
prepared
somewhat without anticipation
another slide
along the continuum
of time
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Comments: 13

Dandooon [2006-03-04 10:59:20 +0000 UTC]

great piece..i`m glad i had the chance to knw your work

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Dandooon [2006-03-04 13:55:32 +0000 UTC]


thank you very much

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Ryu777 [2006-02-28 12:55:49 +0000 UTC]

very nice I like

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Ryu777 [2006-02-28 13:04:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i'm glad you like it ... aging...ah...a challenge for us all i would think!

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Ryu777 In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-02-28 13:06:35 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome....yeah one day I'll know what it's like but for now I'll just enjoy being a teenager for the few months I have left lol

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Ryu777 [2006-02-28 13:34:03 +0000 UTC]

enjoy it all...you have plenty of time... ... it seems to hit physically (from seeing & talking to many people) right around 40 ... then you will suddenly understand the intensity of marketing for anti-aging products LOL

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Ryu777 In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-03-01 12:23:40 +0000 UTC]

lol I kinda know what you mean My mother says things like that a lot but she looks young for her age anyway lol

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to Ryu777 [2006-03-01 16:24:11 +0000 UTC]

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SLB25 [2006-02-28 01:33:36 +0000 UTC]

this is very good...I Love the concept... NICE JOB

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to SLB25 [2006-02-28 12:12:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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SLB25 In reply to relativecosmicmusing [2006-02-28 16:42:10 +0000 UTC]

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braveheart06 [2006-02-27 15:45:32 +0000 UTC]

This is very good!

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relativecosmicmusing In reply to braveheart06 [2006-02-28 12:10:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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