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Description Zuko ran to them, struggling to keep face. There she was, breathing much too shallowly. He kneeled next to her, blood soaking into his robes. His sister’s clothes were singed away for the most part, though they did not rob her of decency. The blade was there, too. It had entered her chest at an odd angle. There was no doubt that it had done some major damage.

Azula was dying.

“…Zula..” He managed to croak. She smiled up at him.

“I’ve been bad, Zuzu.” She coughed, reaching into the pouch of the fallen chief of the Order. She brought from the pocket two letters, both signed in her name. The despairing Fire Lord lifted the papers from his sister’s broken body, setting them aside.

“But you…why?” He sobbed, suddenly overcome by emotion. Never in a million years would he have thought that Azula, Azula, would do such a thing.

“I guess mother’s genes finally decided to show up.” She simply said. A thin streak of blood trailed from her mouth. “She deserves to live.” The fire princess motioned to Mai and the infant. Zuko saw the sadness welled up in his wife’s eyes. The child was quiet, but Mai wept softly, trying to hide her tears.

When he looked back down, he saw that her eyes were empty.

Princess Azula, daughter of Ursa and Ozai, was dead.

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Excerpt from my fanfic, When It's Over


This is that scene. I'm sure some people would rejoice if Azula died. I think I'd actually be sad. did the awesome effects and lighting.

I think that this song describes the Zuko/Azula relationship perfectly.

Angels - Within Temptation

Sparkling angel
I believe
You are my savior
In my time of need

Blinded by faith
I couldn't hear
All the whispers
The warning's so clear

I see the angels
I'll lead them to your door
There is no escape now
Now mercy no more

No remorse 'cause I still remember
The smile when you tore me apart

You took my heart
Deceived me right from the start
You showed me dreams
I wished they'd turn to real
You broke the promise
And made me realize
It was all just a lie

Sparkling angel
Couldn't see
Your dark intentions
Your feelings for me

Fallen angel
Tell me why?
What is the reason?
The thorn in your eye

I see the angels
I'll lead them to your door
There is no escape now
No mercy no more

No remorse 'cause I still remember
The smile when you tore me apart

You took my heart
Deceived me right from the start
You showed me dreams
I wished they'd turn to real
You broke the promise
And made me realize
It was all just a lie

Could have been forever
Now we have reached the end

This world may have failed you
It doesn't give the reason why
You could have chosen
A different path of life

The smile when you tore me apart

You took my heart
Deceived me right from the start
You showed me dreams
I wished they'd turn in to real
You broke a promise
And made me realize
It was all just a lie

Could have been forever
Now we have reached the end

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Here's a video with it: [link]

Enjoy!
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Comments: 35

bellatrixlestrangy [2014-07-12 04:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Nice work. Also, love Within Temptation.

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Gungelion [2010-05-23 04:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Azula! NOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo!

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RavaT [2008-11-23 21:55:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

Please tell me, where is your fic "When It's Over" to be found?

I did not find it on dA ....

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Renoa In reply to RavaT [2008-11-24 02:46:35 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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RavaT In reply to Renoa [2008-11-24 11:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Pronowwn [2008-09-06 23:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Love the coloring (:

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RhymesWithMaggot [2008-07-20 20:49:31 +0000 UTC]

It'd be friggin sad if Azula died.
I thought she might at least turn good in the movie lol.

I love Azula!

Very nice pic btw, goes well with your fanfic.

It's a perfect fanfic. But it'd be more awesome if it goes with the story of the finale.

But this was so before the movie! and I don't blame you at all.

Your story is friggin amazing too, full of creativity...and you got skills writing.

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frandom16 [2008-02-05 23:38:41 +0000 UTC]

god i would die if azula died! ugh.. this is depressing

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Lucifer109 [2008-01-16 18:53:12 +0000 UTC]

I want to read your fanfic...give me a link!

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Renoa In reply to Lucifer109 [2008-01-16 20:56:23 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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Bitter-Nightmare [2008-01-06 00:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Thats really sad, it made me cry.Azula is my favorite female character. But even though its sad I think the picture is beautiful.

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Mah-kee [2008-01-02 20:44:36 +0000 UTC]

I think both are great...
I loved When It's Over because of Azula...she was amazing...and I even felt sorry of her!!
My english is terrible and i couldn't understand many parts...
But in general i could and i really loved it...
congratulations!!
about the drawing...amazing...just like the others!!

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zukocats22 [2007-09-15 19:21:05 +0000 UTC]

what did she do?

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Renoa In reply to zukocats22 [2007-09-16 02:49:46 +0000 UTC]

She died wheb she threw herself between Mai (with her new child) and an assassin.

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uhanekahu [2007-06-18 06:00:45 +0000 UTC]

gah! That brought tears to my eyes it was amazing!

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GEPFC [2007-06-14 05:34:03 +0000 UTC]

I liked it quite a bit. Could you possibly link me to that fanfiction of your's? I'd love to read it.

Peace out.

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Renoa In reply to GEPFC [2007-06-14 14:53:57 +0000 UTC]

n Her Eyes, which is the prequel to this one, is here [link] and When It's Over (this one) is here [link]

Personally, I think In Her Eyes is better, but enjoy nonetheless.

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Lupeta [2007-05-17 21:59:18 +0000 UTC]

it's really sad...
where can i find your fic?

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Renoa In reply to Lupeta [2007-05-17 23:17:45 +0000 UTC]

In Her Eyes, which is the prequel to this one, is here [link] and When It's Over (this one) is here [link]

;D

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Lupeta In reply to Renoa [2007-05-18 11:30:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks
i'm going to read those in a few days.

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IcyAshford [2007-05-05 13:11:19 +0000 UTC]

I knew it was from the story the moment I saw the picture!

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TOPHROX13 [2007-03-20 04:12:24 +0000 UTC]

woa... i'd be sad 2 if azula died... she was in my top 5!!

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heartsyhawk [2007-03-20 00:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow the pic and fic exerpt are both awesome and moving. If the series does end with Azula's death I'm hoping it will be that emotional. I'd also like for her to be redeemed shortly before the matter, but I probably shouldn't hold my breath...

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labarbara [2007-03-19 21:16:06 +0000 UTC]

oh, whoops, just kidding-- you wrote the artist's name right there at the top of the song lyrics. heh! sorry, im a little unobservant...

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labarbara [2007-03-19 21:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice pic! followed the link to your video-- i really like your portrayal of the relationship between these two! It definitely was a new concept to me that there could be something more complicated between zuko and azula than just competition and sibling rivalry. Verrrry interesting!
Who is the artist who sings the song that you put with that video??

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Renoa In reply to labarbara [2007-03-20 22:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but it's not my video.

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labarbara In reply to Renoa [2007-03-20 22:53:29 +0000 UTC]

ohhh haha! whoops! Well, still-- awesome drawing! XD

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lilfirebender [2007-03-19 20:32:50 +0000 UTC]

Oooooo dramatic and pretty. I like it.

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4ever2gether [2007-03-19 19:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, how nice isn't this? :fave:

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shrike85 [2007-03-15 15:15:32 +0000 UTC]

I never thought I'd actually feel much pity for Azula!

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TophNo1 [2007-03-14 13:05:20 +0000 UTC]

I lopve it, pleaaseeeeee draw more about your fanfiction!!!!!!!^^

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Alaea [2007-03-14 11:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow... so sad...

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swan-swan [2007-03-14 04:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Awwww....

Yeah, I'm kind of hoping for an Azula demise like that...something where you feel kind of sorry for her. Zhao's death was not really a sorry-for death...he pulled his hand away and chose to go down, and he was a big, bad, mean man who killed the fish. But Azula...she seems to have been born evil, but...it would be cool to see her end in a tragic manner. Like a lost hope....

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ed00 In reply to swan-swan [2009-12-15 08:29:22 +0000 UTC]

not born, shaped to evil, in the end you see the humaness of her

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sweetfire-05 [2007-03-14 04:34:50 +0000 UTC]

i love this pic...and i'm going to have to start reading your fic!

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