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RenRou — When We Fall - Prologue, page 01 (English)

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Published: 2018-12-10 14:55:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1425; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 4
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So, here we go.

I'll just pretend I'm not worried XD


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Comments: 43

KiGothArt [2018-12-17 15:35:28 +0000 UTC]

A little confused. Is he a pyromancer? Or is it just the gang burning everything pillage style? 

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RenRou In reply to KiGothArt [2018-12-17 15:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, I'd rather you find it out yourself in due time ^^

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jemgirl [2018-12-15 01:54:30 +0000 UTC]

We don't build up to burning the world. Oh no. That is how the story starts.  

Are those tattoos on their foreheads? 

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RenRou In reply to jemgirl [2018-12-17 15:48:44 +0000 UTC]

More like brands, but yes, technically they're tattoed.

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jemgirl In reply to RenRou [2018-12-18 02:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Brands! Brands are not tattoos dear. 

Ouch!

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RenRou In reply to jemgirl [2018-12-18 07:13:06 +0000 UTC]

You mean, brands are done with fire? I'm a bit confused right now.

Anyway, those particular things were made with ink, but in order to brand, that's what I meant.

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jemgirl In reply to RenRou [2018-12-18 11:25:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, brands are made by a fire heated piece of metal being applied to something's/someone's skin. 

It was done to slaves and cattle so if they ran away, got loose or were stolen, they could be easily identified as belonging to someone and who that someone was.

Years and years ago I heard that it was a slight thing is some body modification shops to have yourself branded.

Since the guy's forehead thing wasn't done this way, they would be just tattoos. I only questioned it because in the little sit down we had with the brothers, the guy's forehead was smooth and unmarked. And getting rid of tattoos don't leave you with either. 

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RenRou In reply to jemgirl [2018-12-18 14:36:23 +0000 UTC]

the first two frames are my mistake. He should have this thing on his forehead all the time, my bad, I'll fix it.


As for the brad, I'm sorry if I'm being annoying, but I was going to use the word "brand" a lot in the future and now I'm not so sure it's correct.

This, let's say, mark is tattoed on a person's forehead against their will to indicate that the said person belongs to a certain group of... unwanted individuals. Is it wrong to use "brand" only because it was made by ink, not fire? I'm kinda reluctant to use "tattoo" because tattoos are more often seen as decorations, while brands are ugly and maybe even humiliating things nobody wants to have. Am I completely wrong here?

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jemgirl In reply to RenRou [2018-12-18 15:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I looked up the word and you can technically use the word to describe the mark, but the most common understanding of being branded is to have a shape burned into someone/something. And yes, tattoos are for marks made with ink. If you are being creative with describing the mark you can say he was branded by who ever, but a tattoo is a tattoo and a brand is a brand.

People have been tattooed against their will, so it’s not impossible to think that it won’t happen again in the future.

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RenRou In reply to jemgirl [2018-12-18 17:57:53 +0000 UTC]

I see. Thank you very much for clarification ^^

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jemgirl In reply to RenRou [2018-12-18 19:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem.

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Samhiisi [2018-12-13 18:48:26 +0000 UTC]

What an interesting start!


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RenRou In reply to Samhiisi [2018-12-17 15:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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teacozy1 [2018-12-12 10:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh what a beginning~! I can't wait to read more of this *w*

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RenRou In reply to teacozy1 [2018-12-13 13:58:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I hope it won't disappoint ^^

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teacozy1 In reply to RenRou [2018-12-13 15:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome and I don't think it will :3 
I loved your other comic and this one has a strong start. Hope lots of people check it out ;w;

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AkiaWalker [2018-12-11 23:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!
Though somehow this feels a lot more intense then the promo indicated.......

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RenRou In reply to AkiaWalker [2018-12-13 14:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

Well, the promo version is something of an ariphmetical average of Vince throughout the story, because his is very different with different people and at different stages of his life covered in this story.

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Jigoku-Tsuki [2018-12-11 14:13:52 +0000 UTC]

WOW~
i have so many questions, but i already love this so much already!! 

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RenRou In reply to Jigoku-Tsuki [2018-12-13 14:05:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

I hope the stroy won't be so confusing by the end of the prologue ^^

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Jigoku-Tsuki In reply to RenRou [2018-12-13 16:57:09 +0000 UTC]

don't worry about it love. I know it's going to be great!! xD

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Erinido [2018-12-11 09:10:25 +0000 UTC]

I am super excitied seeing a new comic from you and it looks so promising!

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RenRou In reply to Erinido [2018-12-11 13:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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azurielle1 [2018-12-11 04:44:09 +0000 UTC]

What are you worried about? It's a great start!

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RenRou In reply to azurielle1 [2018-12-11 13:35:14 +0000 UTC]

You know, the usual stuff: would people like this story, what if they won't. Doing something by yourself is one thing, but sharing it with others is a whole different story.

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azurielle1 In reply to RenRou [2018-12-12 01:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I agree! You are very brave, and very talented! I am far too anxious to share most of my stories beyond a few people, so I applaud you. i love the start and I'm already interested. They are exactly my kind of characters. I'll be here waiting for the next part.

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RenRou In reply to azurielle1 [2018-12-13 13:55:14 +0000 UTC]

I think it's thanks to supportive people like you us scaredy cats manage to share our works online ^^

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azurielle1 In reply to RenRou [2018-12-14 04:05:41 +0000 UTC]

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RelwarcTheMighty [2018-12-11 01:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Interesting start!

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RenRou In reply to RelwarcTheMighty [2018-12-11 13:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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Rose-of-the-world [2018-12-10 21:10:27 +0000 UTC]

I am already totally in love with this.

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RenRou In reply to Rose-of-the-world [2018-12-11 13:35:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad to hear this! Thank you ^^

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Sanae94 [2018-12-10 19:15:42 +0000 UTC]

"No human", huh?? So this respectful redhead isn't human then, or does he have a death wish?? This starts quite interesting, I'll keep an eye on your new story :3

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RenRou In reply to Sanae94 [2018-12-10 19:18:21 +0000 UTC]

everyone with marks on their foreheads aren't exactly humans. It will be explained a bit later, though.

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Memory627 [2018-12-10 15:45:42 +0000 UTC]

So, is this some kind of sequel to Stolen, or are these completely new characters in a new world?

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RenRou In reply to Memory627 [2018-12-10 15:48:56 +0000 UTC]

this one is s completely different story, world and characters.

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Memory627 In reply to RenRou [2018-12-10 15:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Just checking, because I was kind of getting Val and Sunshine vibes from a couple characters.

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RenRou In reply to Memory627 [2018-12-10 19:19:03 +0000 UTC]

I can guess who's Sunshine, but wich one is Val?

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Memory627 In reply to RenRou [2018-12-10 20:14:19 +0000 UTC]

The dark-skinned guy with the braids that showed up in one panel.

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RenRou In reply to Memory627 [2018-12-11 13:40:08 +0000 UTC]

I see. There's probably some visual resemblance, not that you mentioned it, but as a character this guy is like polar opposite of Val.

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Memory627 In reply to RenRou [2018-12-11 15:16:22 +0000 UTC]

Looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds, then, it already looks freaking cool!

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Jackewa [2018-12-10 15:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Ren this is awesome! 
I allways loved Stolen and I have no doubt that I will love When we Fall as much as Stolen! 
Plus I have a weak point for redheads
Can't wait to see more of it!

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RenRou In reply to Jackewa [2018-12-10 15:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^^

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