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Retartedfangirl22 — Exploding feelings Deidara x reader [part3]
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Description As you approached Hidan he yelled out to Deidara. "Hey man! Be careful, these people are actually a bit of a challenge! It's about fucking time, right!? Any way, get your ass over here and make this more interesting!" Hidan went back to fighting. He was so fast, like lightning, it made yo feel inferior. But you wouldn't accept that, you decided to jump right in.

You concentrated I to your genjutsu, you placed your bombs discreetly so no one would notice, then looked to Deidara. "You gonna help your friend?" You urged.

"As though you had room to talk, you've done nothing!" He ran forward, not noticing the bombs you had placed.

"I got you man!" Deidara came in contact with the rouges who were standing in the sidelines. With each touch, they exploded. Deidara was shocked, he didn't understand the bombs were DNA bombs. As soon as someone else's skin, DNA, or biochemical tissue touched the bomb, it was to explode.

Soon, the battle ended. Hidan thanked Deidara and hugged him. "Who's the girl you got with you?" Hidan looked confused.

"She's my new partner, who did absolutely nothing. Fat lot of good she did, hm." Deidara looked proud in what he thought was his work.  "I killed all those guys! Yeah, and I don't even know how! I just got that good!"

"Actually, I killed them." You interjected. "You were just help." You explained the DNA bombs.

"Damn, Deidara! You were outsmarted by this chick!  And she's brand-new! You're losing your awesome!" Hidan continued to laugh manically.

Deidara pulled you off behind some trees, checking to make sure Hidan couldn't see

"Look. I never say people are better than me, yeah. But you made me look like a total idiot! "

"You don't need help with looking like an idiot." You rolled your eyes. You liked him, and here you were, insulting him.

"Damn it, you brat, listen to me! We're alike! Hm. If you don't like that then leave! Can't we just agree that we each have things worth bragging about? Ad stop mocking me!" He looked hurt.

"...I didn't realize you felt that way...I'm sorry...I thought you just didn't like me from the beginning, so I..."

He shook his head. "The second I heard you were also a bomber, I immediately became upset and jealous. " he edged closer to you.  "I was an ass...I'm sorry, yeah."

"M-me too.." He leaned in to kiss you...

"Hey!? What the fucks going on back here?"

"Dammit Hidan, you ruined everything!" Deidara's eyes were wide.  "L-let's just go home." He looked at you, as though he had a plan in mind.

You continued home.
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Comments: 42

FallingAutumnLeaf [2016-12-28 23:32:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm such a Tsundere.

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star-of-sea594 [2016-08-29 01:39:29 +0000 UTC]

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you

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Kawaidesukiti13 [2015-06-25 13:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Shouldn't have read this at midnight, trying not to laugh to wake my parents up XD

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Aleomontrayloge In reply to Kawaidesukiti13 [2015-07-11 18:12:21 +0000 UTC]

The trueness of this is scary 

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Kawaidesukiti13 In reply to Aleomontrayloge [2015-07-12 02:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Ikr!

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sweetsassycat [2014-06-18 21:03:46 +0000 UTC]

my mind as turn off my studies and switch to pervert

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selena5000 [2013-09-27 13:33:16 +0000 UTC]

mmm he has a plan in mind ??

what sort of plans ??

i think i know wink wink

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Ayumi-Haruka [2013-09-17 11:52:34 +0000 UTC]

w...ww.wwhat did i just read O.O

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coolcat112 [2013-09-04 11:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Huh it's over already?

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KiraChanGaaraFan [2013-08-13 20:51:27 +0000 UTC]

He probably is gonna get some since they share a room

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Zeldapointdefer [2013-04-28 20:49:26 +0000 UTC]

You're not worthless actually if you are what I'm supposed to be? A part of the néant?

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NatsuProductions In reply to Zeldapointdefer [2013-07-26 01:19:45 +0000 UTC]

If she's worthless, we're chopped liver

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XdemonwolfX65 [2013-03-02 05:28:58 +0000 UTC]

And i love this story.

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XdemonwolfX65 [2013-03-02 05:28:44 +0000 UTC]

None of you are worthless!

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Animefreak2021 [2013-02-28 02:32:07 +0000 UTC]

You're not worthless I am

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amy962 [2013-01-18 00:22:16 +0000 UTC]

plz provide links to the next and previous chapter if ur doing chapters

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kittykatluvur777 [2013-01-17 02:05:26 +0000 UTC]

gah! yur nut worthless! nuuuu

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MoonAngel92 [2013-01-15 03:52:14 +0000 UTC]

please more??

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Luuumi-k [2013-01-13 04:47:46 +0000 UTC]

I will waiting for more *-*♥

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NiroLatsuy [2013-01-13 03:35:02 +0000 UTC]

aww loced it cant wait for the next part ^^

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RenjiLuv2 [2013-01-13 00:11:10 +0000 UTC]

More more more!

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ShippudenSakuraGirl [2013-01-12 22:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww So Cute o3o

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AkameArashi [2013-01-12 21:20:35 +0000 UTC]

You're great writer! And fantastic theme to write and idea. I'm waiting for more

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Anime-wolfz [2013-01-12 20:59:13 +0000 UTC]

lol i got a bit curious that hidan was saying awsome and maybe a bit prussia like...then i notice u see hetalia so explains a lot

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to Anime-wolfz [2013-01-12 21:00:02 +0000 UTC]

I have so much...fandoms!
They rub off on eachother XD

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Anime-wolfz In reply to Retartedfangirl22 [2013-01-12 21:03:17 +0000 UTC]

yet the awsome only begins

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to Anime-wolfz [2013-01-12 21:06:08 +0000 UTC]

xD thanks!
I'm just, I'm at a writers block right now DX

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Anime-wolfz In reply to Retartedfangirl22 [2013-01-12 21:08:49 +0000 UTC]

that sucks maybe some anime will help >w< or watching fanart

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to Anime-wolfz [2013-01-12 21:13:14 +0000 UTC]

I need to watch something, you're right xD

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Anime-wolfz In reply to Retartedfangirl22 [2013-01-12 21:17:08 +0000 UTC]

maybe some deidara stuff on youtube or just random stuff

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to Anime-wolfz [2013-01-12 21:21:19 +0000 UTC]

I just ... my mind is blank

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Anime-wolfz In reply to Retartedfangirl22 [2013-01-12 21:30:38 +0000 UTC]

well day dreaming helps...if u were an artist that basically had 2 compete with dei cuz of his attitude you would guess that any art u do he will basically try 2 do it better XD

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to Anime-wolfz [2013-01-12 21:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Deidara is too amazing!!!!

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Anime-wolfz In reply to Retartedfangirl22 [2013-01-12 21:40:34 +0000 UTC]

not az awesome az ze awesome Prussia

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Ra9wr [2013-01-12 20:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Please continue!! This story is too awesome! XD

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to Ra9wr [2013-01-12 20:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Of course

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AutumnNigthingale [2013-01-12 20:53:01 +0000 UTC]

OMG keep making this PLEASE! or its still okay if you don't its still great enough<33

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to AutumnNigthingale [2013-01-12 20:55:10 +0000 UTC]

I will be making more xD

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AutumnNigthingale In reply to Retartedfangirl22 [2013-01-12 20:57:59 +0000 UTC]

: DDDDD

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HeartStorm4ever [2013-01-12 19:55:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh please continue!! This is great!!

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Retartedfangirl22 In reply to HeartStorm4ever [2013-01-12 20:03:34 +0000 UTC]

I will!

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HeartStorm4ever In reply to Retartedfangirl22 [2013-01-12 20:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Yay ^^

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