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Scotston [2010-11-14 15:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Hello, Thank you for submitting to Critique Night. Here is your feedback from last night!

^Onlooker1234^ So cute! You did really well with the head and the body, but maybe it would help to do a leg and hair study (and I'm not talking waxing). Your light source and shadows make sense. I would also encourage you to try and shade it in or colour it. It works well for line art though

^candid-crocodiles^ I'm loving the theme of this image and the freedom it expresses. The mountains are very realistic and the horse looks very fuzzy and cute hehe XD. I feel that the head of the horse is slightly out of proportion from the body- the rule of thumb is usually like two and a half to three heads is the length of a body (I read this somewhere- I'll do some research and give you the source). I love the body though! The anatomy is beautiful

^Little-Hercy^ i really like the heard; you did a great job there. The neck looks a little long. Because its twisted it doesn’t look that bad but when you straighten it out it will be a little long. i love the mountain in the background!! But the foreground of this picture.. Is a little unclear to me. The shadowing is very nice and it has a clear light source. Well done with this picture

^Oasispegasus^ The head especially is really interesting to me. There is an almost serene feeling to this horse, very little detailing, but that makes the head really stand out to me, if that was drawn much bigger with the mane finishing the neck off, i'd love that as a print. The conformation of the hind legs and shoulders isnt quite spot on, however i can see just being a sketch, there is room to improve on that. Maybe ink would interest you? Cross hatching the background can be a simple but effective way of deepening out a piece

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Little-Hercy [2010-11-06 02:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Pretty.. i really like the face~!! (:

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The-Wet-Paint-Stock [2010-11-05 21:54:52 +0000 UTC]

*wishes to sell soul* This is so amazing. *faints*

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