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Published: 2011-05-10 16:00:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1344; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 16
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JUDGMENT FACTION

In completion of this story quest: [link]
Reward: 80 Astral (IDK I drew 6 people so I guess I reached maximum? *3* )

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I wanted Lucrezia to tell Aequitas (and us) of her experiences in Telia in a form of a diary.

For a change, I combined illustration and narration to complete this quest. Instead of drawing character interaction, I drew them from Ruku's perspective when they interacted and have Ruku tell her comments about the traveller she met.
//shotkickedslapped for reusing pics @//^//@
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Individual pics:
RK: [link]
Senka:[link]
Altima: [link]
Shura: [link]
Claremont: [link]

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fhagfh finally levelling up *w*
I wish to become a Friend soon ahaha but I wonder what are achievements? OTL
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JOIN TELIAN CHRONICLES NOW!

Sorry guys, I'm in a roll lately... gotta spam you all with submissions for this group because it deserves moar love *3*//

TO EVERYONE AT JUDGMENT FACTION: LET'S DRAW MORE SO WE CAN SAVE AN ISLAND FROM DESTRUCTION!! (9*3*)9
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Lucrezia LaRoche-Focauld © =ShuryouGospel13
Senka/Claribel © *Deamond89
Claremont ©*Nurt
Altima Rhynis © *Regnius
Shura © ~lijon
RK © =Arettu
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Comments: 53

retrozero In reply to ??? [2011-06-03 14:06:36 +0000 UTC]

ffgkagk

thank you brooo

hngggg //spams you back with repliesssss

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Borezilla68 In reply to retrozero [2011-06-03 16:33:25 +0000 UTC]

dhkd,dnfh

You welcome

omgiwilltrymybesttorducemyspamdunneedtoreplyyouabusygarl<3; u ;

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mymu2 [2011-05-12 15:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Love this diary! >3<;;

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shiroisuisei [2011-05-12 08:31:06 +0000 UTC]

HOMG it looks so kewl and pro

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BlueyyKnight [2011-05-11 02:27:59 +0000 UTC]

so pretty ~ ~ ~

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Elphium [2011-05-11 00:40:46 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing

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Nurt [2011-05-11 00:20:07 +0000 UTC]

>w<
Clare is very happy to make her feel like a princess.
*nuzzle*

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Piece5113 [2011-05-10 21:30:58 +0000 UTC]

hehe this kind of reminds me of those games(uh forgot what they are called;; games like Persona maybe?) where characters talk to you(or the character you are playing with)?? sorry for my fail explanation Shuryou sdjlsf llorz

Anyway, dawww this was really fun to read. Lucrezia is so cute <3 And I can't believe how fast you draw Q3Q!

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retrozero In reply to Piece5113 [2011-05-12 15:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, visual novels? *w* I guess that's it XD Yes, I was trying for that feel and look! I'm glad you noticed it!

Haha thank you Piece<333
Oh, the drawings took 2 hours each because they're just simply shaded ahaha =v= If it were more complicated, I wouldn't be that fast @w@

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Piece5113 In reply to retrozero [2011-05-12 19:43:32 +0000 UTC]

O-oh yes, those haha XD /fail llorz

Baww even my simple stuff takes like 434o34204+ hours fsdjl

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Sylris [2011-05-10 21:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha, very very good, Shuryou. xD I really enjoyed this.

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-12 14:08:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you do! :>

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-12 20:21:53 +0000 UTC]

We -still- need to RP sometime. >=]

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-14 06:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Just drop by a comment on her profile app because I can't spend much time on chatrooms though

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-17 00:00:03 +0000 UTC]

What about through notes? o3o;

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-17 02:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I don't RP through notes 'v'

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-17 02:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww. xD Why only through comments? It feels weird just making a random RP comment.

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-17 02:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I'm used to RP comments and it's easier for linking when I draw about that RP *v*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-17 02:58:21 +0000 UTC]

This is true, this is true. Well, when would you be up for an RP? ouo

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-17 03:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Anytime *v*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-17 04:20:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay, where would you like the setting? =u=

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-17 08:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you may want to come up with any setting you like @v@ I'm not creative in choosing settings OTL Please lead the RP *v*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-17 21:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *Standing outside a store in Edda, Jacke was staring into the display glass, staring at all the instruments therein. His hand was up on his chin, scratching it over the mask.*

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-19 03:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Lucrezia: *Notices the suspicious-looking man by the window of that particular store. She doesn't feel like approaching but she decided to watch that particular man in case he does something mischievous*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-19 04:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *Continues to look for a moment before pulling out what seemed like a wallet of some kind, and then sighing and starting to turn away. It seemed he didn't have a lot of money, this one. But his dusty and mended clothes made that seem apparent, already.*

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-20 15:06:53 +0000 UTC]

Lucrezia: Bah, he sure looks like a poor thief! It seems that he cannot infiltrate the security in that store thus he is planning to attack another! I must keep an eye on him! *blends with the crowd and pretends to be window-shopping, but in truth, she is keeping an eye on Jacke*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-20 22:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *As he continues to move along and looking around him from time to time, he quirks a brow, having seen the same girl repeatedly. He continues to walk along the streets, sometimes turning circles around different blocks, just seeing if she were following him.* ....

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-23 12:49:48 +0000 UTC]

((sorry for my very late reply TT____TT))

Lucrezia: *pauses to think* What is this man doing? Is he trying to escape from my watch? Hmm...Clever one, but I'm not going to fall for that! *goes up the nearby clocktower and keeps an eye on Jacke from afar*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-23 19:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *He noticed the girl had seemed to have stopped following him, but he wasn't entirely sure that someone willing to follow him in such a way would give up. He then steps into an unassuming alleyway that obscured him from view from anyone other than others in the alley.*

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-24 08:58:47 +0000 UTC]

Lucrezia: Pff. What a bummer. What does he plan by hiding in those alleys?
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He's not yet coming out?
*goes down the clocktower to check out.*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-25 01:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *He waited for her at this point. He was up against the building right at the entrance of the alley. He knew if they were persistent, they would follow eventually. He waited until the girl walked by, a gun raised up.* Why the hell you followin' me, little darlin'? |:

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-26 07:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Lucrezia: F-Following?? E-Excuse me! I don't know what you're talking about!! And DON'T YOU EVER DARE CALLING ME LITTLE DARLING!!

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-26 19:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *She didn't seem intimidated at all. She was either confident, unaware, or both. He sighed. It was just a little girl, after all.* You been followin' me 'round for some time now. *He wasn't surprised she got upset at him. There seemed to be a lot of people who took bad to being called "darling".* That's just a term for girls where I come from, darlin'. You sayin' you ain't one?

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-05-27 14:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Lucrezia: I don't care if you call little girls "darlin'"! JUST STOP CALLING ME DARLING!
And for heaven's sake I'm not following you, okay? I just happened to look for...something. And it's just coincidence you met me here, okay?!

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-05-30 17:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *It seemed he hadn't really gathered the attention of someone dangerous at this point. Just a bored, if but a bit spoiled kid.* ...Right. Coincidence. *He slipped his gun back underneath his poncho and out of view before turning away from her. He then started to walk away, holding up a hand in a lazy wave.*

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retrozero In reply to Sylris [2011-06-02 08:57:22 +0000 UTC]

Lucrezia: Hmph! *snappily turns around the opposite direction of Jacke and talks to self* I'm tired of following... I'd just let those cops do their job! *flicks hair*

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Sylris In reply to retrozero [2011-06-07 04:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Jacke: *Just starts walking away. He didn't have the ambition to deal with this kind of situation. Not that he was good with younger people to begin with.*

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Nene203 [2011-05-10 20:30:34 +0000 UTC]

aah this is so cute! I love Lucrezia's character :'D
I've read of that club when you linked it the first time, but I didn't get it at all... is it like dA-Fantasia? D:

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retrozero In reply to Nene203 [2011-05-12 14:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Nee-san~!! <333
Yes, It's similar to dA-Fantasia though it's got a leveling system (so no godmodding XD) and there's no rules regarding your characters origin :>

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iruke [2011-05-10 20:13:19 +0000 UTC]

s-stop please i cant take much more *about to cave and join*

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retrozero In reply to iruke [2011-05-12 15:04:11 +0000 UTC]

PLEASE JOINNNNN *drags*
so we can RP sometime @w@

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huina [2011-05-10 19:57:38 +0000 UTC]

awwwww... Lucrezia is so cute~~~~

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applePAI [2011-05-10 19:26:02 +0000 UTC]

SO PRETTY WOW <3 I just love this whole thing.

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Huuni [2011-05-10 18:00:58 +0000 UTC]

That last grid! she's so cute >< Thanks to you I think I'll never get over tsudere's. Awesome work and yes ditto to IWillFly, it was fun to read xD

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IWillFly [2011-05-10 17:42:08 +0000 UTC]

That a really cool idea! I like how it's not just text and it's not just a picture, it was fun!

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Deamond-89 [2011-05-10 17:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Senka: *steals Lucrezia's diary, reading through it* HEY!!! DWARF!!! WHO DO YOU CALL A LEAFY-HEADED LITTLE BRAT!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!

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Arikawaii13 [2011-05-10 16:53:24 +0000 UTC]

I loved this alot! Aequitas reminds me of the latin word Aequus.

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retrozero In reply to Arikawaii13 [2011-05-12 16:00:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks!
Oh, what does that mean.."Aequus"?

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Arikawaii13 In reply to retrozero [2011-05-12 20:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Calm,just or even.

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retrozero In reply to Arikawaii13 [2011-05-14 06:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thanks for the additional info~ <3

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