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Published: 2005-08-23 15:28:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1487; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 41
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I Dont UnderstandI don’t understand you,
But its not like I have a right to.
I don’t understand why,
You need to be everyone’s arms to fall into,
And shoulder to cry on.
I wish you were mine.
I wish you were there for me too,
Instead of catering to everyone else’s needs.
It seems like you never know what’s bothering me.
Is it that you don’t know,
Or is it that you're preoccupied with other people problems,
That you put mine on hold?
I wish I could fall into your arms,
And cry on your shoulder when I need to,
But you too busy with everyone else,
And I feel like I cant.
I feel like you're being taken up
And there’s no room left for me on your shoulder.
You try and help me,
But you just don’t understand why I’m hurting.
You don’t understand what I’m feeling.
In your mind it seems to be no big deal,
But in my mind, its part of my biggest fear.
Even though its over,
I can still feel it sometimes,
When I’m alone
And thinking,
I think about her,
And I start to cry.
I know in my mind it wasn’t anything serious,
I just cant get my heart to believe the same.
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EmotionalFireball [2009-10-22 09:08:29 +0000 UTC]
If this is from your heart, then you should tell her how you feel. Maybe she misses you too.
In any case this picture is really touching.
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ReverseIncision In reply to MoonPrincessSerenity [2005-08-27 19:12:53 +0000 UTC]
thanks...but they arent lyrics
i wrote it, its a poem
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MoonPrincessSerenity In reply to ReverseIncision [2005-08-27 23:53:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh, well it's still beautiful.
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ReverseIncision In reply to MoonPrincessSerenity [2005-08-28 20:58:01 +0000 UTC]
haha, thank ya
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AngelAsylum [2005-08-24 18:46:44 +0000 UTC]
I'm always there for you, but I never know whats wrong because you don't tell me. If you want a shoulder to cry on you're gonna have to tell me what's wrong and why you're crying. I help one person and you think I'm being "taken up"? I try help you whenever you admit that something's wrong! I don't see how you expect me to know what you're feeling or what's wrong if you don't even let me in. I'm not god I can't magically know what you're going through. You make this whole thing seem like I cheated on you when all I did was complement another girl, maybe my complement was a little to eloquent for your taste but none the less it was only a complement nothing more. I think you're dragging this out to be more than it really is, this happened almost a year ago, let it go.
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ReverseIncision In reply to AngelAsylum [2005-08-24 20:56:32 +0000 UTC]
ill write you a letter. i dont want this to be up on here
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typically-chaos [2005-08-23 17:45:56 +0000 UTC]
I love this peice, it really touched me. and I can pretty much relate to it as well. All I can say about this that it is beautifully done, the image and the writting!! I love the fading person in the backround and the pose of the model. Very powerful words and so much emotion simply beautiful!
You left me speechless for any more words
-Mags
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ReverseIncision In reply to typically-chaos [2005-08-23 18:58:44 +0000 UTC]
wow, thank you! i appreciate your comment
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typically-chaos In reply to ReverseIncision [2005-08-23 19:24:05 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome hug: *back*
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BloodyBlackRoses [2005-08-23 15:30:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Powerful. <3
By the way. I finally got my software to work. Thanks for letting me use one of your pictures for my avatar! <3
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ReverseIncision In reply to BloodyBlackRoses [2005-08-23 15:33:32 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
oh, no problem
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BloodyBlackRoses In reply to ReverseIncision [2005-08-23 15:35:16 +0000 UTC]
^_^ You're welcome! ^^
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