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"As I Die..."By: Jade Lightning
"For those who know that true love, can outlast even time and death."
...I lie here in bleak silence...
Sorrow...and tears all around,
and...even now it's hard to breathe,
I know my time is running out...
...I know my pain and suffering will be over...
No longer...shall I cry,
But I still hurt while I think of you...
and our love...as I die.
I worry for my mom and dad...
who've suffered as I grew weak...
It must hurt them so...to lose their son...
...I hope...that soon, they find relief.
...I know death will soon take me...
but...I don't know how to say...goodbye...
...as I see you, weeping over me...
trying to stay strong...as I die.
I--I cannot give you comfort...
like I could before,
...and as I lie here...I close my eyes...
...and remember my life once more.
I remember our love, so sweet...and strong,
and now...I too...must cry,
remembering our wedding and its bliss...
lying here so frail...as I die.
How I wish it could be different,
so I could live...and be with you some more,
...to live...just long enough to be with you...
to see our baby daughter...be born.
That's what makes me...hurt the most...
This damn disease that made all things go awry,
I'll lose you...and our unborn child...
You're all I think about...as I die....
......
The time has almost come my love...
even now I'm too weak to weep...
So with my last strength, to you both...
I write my last words...before eternal sleep.
......
My dearest love, don't mourn me too long, for our daughter will be here soon. I need you to be strong, though I won't be here...Our little girl's gonna need you. She'll be here for you as I can't be, and give you so much love...Love...that though you can't feel from me, I'll be sending you both from above. I love you more than life itself; It is losing you both that hurts me the most...
but...
You're coming back now, crying out your eyes, and I can't make the pain leave...as I die...or perhaps...
.....
"Darling, I'll always be with you, and our baby girl. Be strong for her, and you let her know her daddy will always, always love her...as I'll always...always...love you..."
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Comments: 11
ReverseTheEclipse In reply to CosmicAngel84 [2006-05-12 23:27:26 +0000 UTC]
Awwe, thanks so much! I appreciate it,
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CosmicAngel84 In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-05-13 01:49:25 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome!
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HopelssRomanticGhost [2006-05-12 21:13:50 +0000 UTC]
That was so touching.
That was beautiful though! Great job!
Navi: Will yo be needing a tiss-
WWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Navi: Nevermind. -_-; Anyway, cool poem dude!
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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to HopelssRomanticGhost [2006-05-12 23:28:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much, I appreciate it, ^^
Glad you liked it too Navi,
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HopelssRomanticGhost In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-05-13 17:24:04 +0000 UTC]
Navi: Tis alright. Reminds me of my mom.
Wait, what?
Wait, what?
Navi: Nothing.
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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to NestTheEchidna [2006-05-12 17:37:12 +0000 UTC]
*hands you a tissue* Yeah, it's really sad, made me cry reading over it, Thanks for the fave on it thought, I appreciate it,
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NestTheEchidna In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2006-05-12 20:42:13 +0000 UTC]
It was just so beautiful, how could I not fav it?
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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to NestTheEchidna [2006-05-12 23:28:53 +0000 UTC]
That's very sweet of ya Nest, thanks again,
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